Sins

Hey :) Once again... I don't really have anything to review here! This chapter was even better than the first one. You made me ask lots of questions, wanting to ...

Hey there Danie! :) I have to say, this was great! To be honest with you, I'm not going to critique anything. Mostly because there isn't really anything to critique! ...

Hey again Esther :) I'm here for the last review 8) Alex’s expression while waiting for the princess to enter the throne room was one of extreme boredom. He slouched ...

Hey! For the third time, :wink: You know the drill, nitpicks! The carriage that was carrying the princess was late to arrive. It would sound better as, The carriage that ...

Hey again! :) Once again, I'll start with the nasty bits :wink: “At least horses obey the physics of the known world and don't not fly through air dramatically whenever ...

Hey Esther! Here as requested :wink: I'm going to start off with my least favourite bit, the nit-picks! “Y-you are impossible!” the princess quavered. This should be, T he princess ...

Hey... again! :lol: I'm on the third chapter now! Woop! I've got to say, this was great! I'm not actually going to point out any nit-picks because there are hardly ...

Hey, once again :wink: (CHAPTER-2) JOSH BURTON 26th June, 2009 12:57 AM “Eureka! I have found it at last,” I roared with excitement waking up my wife, Dora. "What is ...

Hey again :D I've got to say, I liked this even more than the prologue! If the next chapter is even better than this, then I can't wait to read ...

Heya :D Thanks for being my first reveiw request! For that, I virtually hug you. *Gives virtual hug* And thanks for my reviews as well, by the way! To be ...

haha, this is great 8) Like Knightly said, this isn't a review. I just thought I'd drop by and leave a comment! And I got mentioned, I think anyway :lol: ...

Hey :) It is pretty clear that you have talent! Your use of description is extremely good! But I do actually agree with Esme on the fact that I don't ...

Heya Apple, my storybook buddy :wink: :lol: Don't take my review too seriously, by the way. I'm terrible at reviewing. I thought I'd warn you. I have no idea what ...

Hey DayDreams. :) I thought that this was pretty good! The sun has been forgotten and long gone The rains that come next are the salts These were my favourite ...

Hey there Kite :) I have to agree with the other reviewers. It feels as though there is something missing from this poem. :? I don't really feel emotionally attached, ...