Sins

Hey again! Here to review. 8) With the wind and flower petals I'm standing in the meadow. Just like your other poem, I loved these opening lines! They were simple ...

Heya :) Here to review as requested! I'm not very good at critiquing poetry so you'll have to bare with me! W here the moon glows tenderly in the night ...

Heya tam :) Here to review, duh... The golden sun shimmered over the e field of the lushest grass, and on the lushest grass were beautiful emerald stems- with beautiful ...

Heya :) Here to review as requested! You've had some pretty good reviews here, especially from bear! I'm not going to give you an extremely thorough review, everyone else has ...

Hey Dreamy :) Here as requested! Yellow daiseies in a blue field, sun shining greener than ever I've feeled Technically, this should be felt. It doesn't bother me too much ...

Heya :) Here to review as requested. A buzz echoed through the white walls of Auckland National Airport , making me feel all happy and giddy inside. "You know perfectly ...

Heya :) I had to comment on this because the title's my username, just without the 's' on the end. :smt005 Yeah, I'm weird like that. Ron didn't want to ...

I've got to say, this was great! This isn't really a proper review, by the way... sorry. :xd: I myself don't actually mind the Twilight books. They're not amazing, but ...

Heya yuriiko! Skins here to review. 8) Red = Corrections/Negatives Blue = Things I like Bold = My comments/suggestions Psst! Frightened, I jumped a little from my bed. I’ve been ...

Hey again! Here to review. :wink: Red = Corrections/negatives Blue = Things I like Bold = My comments/suggestions Chapter 1 The rain pounded harder than ever on the windshield, making ...

Heya :) Here to review as requested! I'm not very good at reviewing poetry, so don't take my critique too seriously. I'll definitely try my best though. A crash Glass ...

Heya :) Here to review! Red = Corrections/negatives Blue = Things I like Bold = My comments/suggestions Adam, Its been three weeks since your leaving and with every passing day ...

Hey again shubhi 8) You know the drill. I want to mention something first though! This is kind of off topic, sorry! I've noticed that you don't post your writing ...

Heya! You know the drill... :wink: I assumed the park where they told me to meet them at was Lions Park. No way was I going to search the entire ...

Hey VeraWinters! Here to review. :) I'm surprised to see that no one has nit-picked you. Oh well, I guess that's my job in this case. So yeah, onto the ...