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Re: War of Dawn - Chapter 15
Me again! Let's get right into this, then. I really enjoyed this chapter for its character development. It was definitely necessary after spending as much time as you did on ...
Jun 25, 2016 -
Re: War of Dawn - Chapter 14
Finally, here I am :P Just a pre-warning, I'm very rusty with this reviewing thing atm, and can already tell that I may not be the most useful I've ever ...
Jun 22, 2016 -
Re: Ruby of Revenge [Part 3]
Finally, I hath arrived! The fact that you update this so infrequently *shakes fist* yet I don't have trouble recalling what happened in the last parts of this story is ...
May 17, 2016 -
Re: The Myth-Chapter nine; The new tour guide
Hey there :D It's awesome that you're writing again, yay you! I don't usually do nit-picks, but I'm feeling them today, so I'll start the review off with those. “Yeah ...
May 12, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 7, The Name Game
Hi there! Sincerest apologies for getting to this so late, but I've read your updated chapters and am dropping off here for a review :) In regards to your edits, ...
May 12, 2016 -
Re: War of Dawn - Chapter 13
Heyhey! :) I'm getting to this a lot sooner than I thought, so yay for that. I should be revising for exams and not procrastinating, don't get me wrong, but ...
May 11, 2016 -
Re: Stranger
hidere :) I'm in severe procrastination mode atm, so here I am to review this lovely work of yours instead of continue with my exam revision. Go me! Y'know what, ...
May 3, 2016 -
Re: Lost Girl
Hey there, I spotted this work of yours in the green room, so figured I'd come check it out :) My head feels sore, like the skin is being ripped ...
May 3, 2016 -
Re: The Marrilian Chapter 1 – The QSDD Interlude
I saw this lurking in the green room, so couldn't resist coming on over to review. The boy stopped fifteen feet away from Erica, halting mid run with a shocked ...
May 3, 2016 -
Re: It Kinda Smelled Like Funnel Cake
Hey, I saw this lurking in the green room, so figured I'd come rescue it and let it escape. I'm assuming this is the first chapter, so apologies if I'm ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: Chasing Eden
Hey there, AnarchyWolf! I spotted this piece of yours in the green room, so figured I'd come on over and review it for you :) Though this is quite a ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: Seventeen hills chapters 0-18 (chapters 1-3) [unedited]
Hello, here as promised! 8) I know I said this before and yadda yadda, but welcome again to YWS. I'm hoping you're liking it thus far, and hopefully you're not ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: Defying Expectation
MY 1,000TH REVIEW I don't usually do nit-picks because I don't trust myself with them/I'm lazy, but I figured I would here because of the whole 1,000th review thing 'cause, ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: War of Dawn - Chapter 12
Heya, taking a break from revision, so figured I'd come on over here :) “A Risen.” Owen grunts, his face frowned in disgust by the ghastly display. “What the hell...? ...
May 1, 2016 -
Re: Leaving a Spark
Hey there, and welcome to YWS! *throws confetti* Hopefully you'll learn to love this place, and decide to stick around for a while. I've been here 7 years now, so ...
Apr 29, 2016
