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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: War of Dawn - Chapter 15

    Me again! Let's get right into this, then. I really enjoyed this chapter for its character development. It was definitely necessary after spending as much time as you did on ...

    Jun 25, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: War of Dawn - Chapter 14

    Finally, here I am :P Just a pre-warning, I'm very rusty with this reviewing thing atm, and can already tell that I may not be the most useful I've ever ...

    Jun 22, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Ruby of Revenge [Part 3]

    Finally, I hath arrived! The fact that you update this so infrequently *shakes fist* yet I don't have trouble recalling what happened in the last parts of this story is ...

    May 17, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Myth-Chapter nine; The new tour guide

    Hey there :D It's awesome that you're writing again, yay you! I don't usually do nit-picks, but I'm feeling them today, so I'll start the review off with those. “Yeah ...

    May 12, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 7, The Name Game

    Hi there! Sincerest apologies for getting to this so late, but I've read your updated chapters and am dropping off here for a review :) In regards to your edits, ...

    May 12, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: War of Dawn - Chapter 13

    Heyhey! :) I'm getting to this a lot sooner than I thought, so yay for that. I should be revising for exams and not procrastinating, don't get me wrong, but ...

    May 11, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Spiritual Re: Stranger

    hidere :) I'm in severe procrastination mode atm, so here I am to review this lovely work of yours instead of continue with my exam revision. Go me! Y'know what, ...

    May 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Action / Adventure Re: Lost Girl

    Hey there, I spotted this work of yours in the green room, so figured I'd come check it out :) My head feels sore, like the skin is being ripped ...

    May 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: ​The Marrilian Chapter 1 – The QSDD Interlude

    I saw this lurking in the green room, so couldn't resist coming on over to review. The boy stopped fifteen feet away from Erica, halting mid run with a shocked ...

    May 3, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: It Kinda Smelled Like Funnel Cake

    Hey, I saw this lurking in the green room, so figured I'd come rescue it and let it escape. I'm assuming this is the first chapter, so apologies if I'm ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Chasing Eden

    Hey there, AnarchyWolf! I spotted this piece of yours in the green room, so figured I'd come on over and review it for you :) Though this is quite a ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Horror Re: Seventeen hills chapters 0-18 (chapters 1-3) [unedited]

    Hello, here as promised! 8) I know I said this before and yadda yadda, but welcome again to YWS. I'm hoping you're liking it thus far, and hopefully you're not ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Defying Expectation

    MY 1,000TH REVIEW I don't usually do nit-picks because I don't trust myself with them/I'm lazy, but I figured I would here because of the whole 1,000th review thing 'cause, ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: War of Dawn - Chapter 12

    Heya, taking a break from revision, so figured I'd come on over here :) “A Risen.” Owen grunts, his face frowned in disgust by the ghastly display. “What the hell...? ...

    May 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Leaving a Spark

    Hey there, and welcome to YWS! *throws confetti* Hopefully you'll learn to love this place, and decide to stick around for a while. I've been here 7 years now, so ...

    Apr 29, 2016


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