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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: A Hero's Welcome - Chapter 2

    I hath returned for chapter two! It was a girl’s voice; no boy could ever scream like that. Well, you'd be surprised... You don't even want to know some of ...

    Jun 18, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: A Hero's Welcome - Chapter 1

    It's me again! All of the electricity had gone haywire during the lightning storm so the mayor declared that they would use it no more. Didn't you mention the mayor ...

    Jun 17, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: A Hero's Welcome - Prologue

    Yo yo yo yo yo, Noelle! I'm currently on the stalk for some new novels (one of my many endearing attributes) to start following here on YWS, and so I've ...

    Jun 17, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Collapse: Chapter Two

    Yo, Sand-to-the-vich! As long as you maintained a low profile, you could stay in these places as long as you wanted... I'd recommend putting a for before the second as ...

    Jun 16, 2013
  • Short Story » General, Romantic Re: White Veil

    Hey there, I'm here to review this little story you have here! The June sun beamed down from a cloudless sky at the Hudson mansion lawn. I personally believe that ...

    Jun 16, 2013
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Twisted Demeanor

    Hey there, Deanz, I just came across this in the green room and the title really caught my interest so i thought I'd take a look. I briefly skim read ...

    Jun 16, 2013
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Loss and Gain pt. 1

    Hey Unicorn, I was browsing the Green Room when I came across this so I thought I'd come and review it for you! I sighed as I looked at the ...

    Jun 16, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Collapse: Chapter One

    Yo Sandvichhhhhh! I was browsing the green room, saw your name, and figured I'd come review this for you :) The car had crashed less than a minute earlier, slamming ...

    Jun 15, 2013
  • Script » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Harnesse - Episode 1 "Warning Signals"

    Me reviewing a script, lols He bents to pick up his basket. I think you mean bends ...Ien and Anabella share a look, accidentally a first. I don't quite get ...

    Jun 15, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Days We Forget to Love- *Chapter Three*

    Yay, chapter three! Getting inside the door, she collapsed by the door, sliding the high heels off her feet and dropping her purse beside her. The repetition of door in ...

    Jun 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Days We Forget to Love- *Chapter Two*

    Iya She suppose it's become her signature 'Daniel' drink. This should be She supposed it had become her signature 'Daniel' drink "Where you been, girl? We've missed you! I haven't ...

    Jun 14, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Days We Forget to Love- *Chapter One*

    Yoyoyoyoyoy, yoooooooooo As she had sat on her old beat up leather couch, with the rain pattering on the roof of her town house, she felt like the world was ...

    Jun 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: The Days we Forget to Love- *Prologue* *Edited*

    Yo, Spark 2 da Doubt, I'm here to read and review this as promised! The days when they forget to love each other are the worst. There's nothing wrong here, ...

    Jun 13, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Lost Ones Chapter one (Conner and Margret)

    Hey there, Gabrielle, I'm here to review your chapter! :) Mom and I are sneaking through the shadows of a forgotten peach orchard when I hear the gun shot. I ...

    Jun 12, 2013
  • Poetry » Realistic, Realistic Re: The Two Faced World

    Hey there, I'm here to review this poem you have here :) Now before I begin, I want to warn you that poetry isn't my forte, so I'm not sure ...

    Jun 12, 2013


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