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  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Blotted Out - Chapter 3.1

    You posted this at the perfect time for me because before now I was watching Japanese K-Pop make-up tutorials on youtube while snacking on an entire packet of breath mints ...

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Reverie: Chapter 1: A Rather Curious Boy

    hidere. I've bene lurking around YWS all day without actually doing anything, so I figured I'd pull my socks up and do so. I noticed this in the literary spotlight ...

    Feb 15, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Mr. Timetraveler - Chapter 2

    I was going to review this tomorrow, but then I realised I had loads of stuff I should technically be doing right now that I don't want to do, so ...

    Feb 11, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Mr. Timetraveler - Chapter 1

    hidere. Okay so I think this review will be pretty bad because I really enjoyed this chapter. Oops. I forgotten most of what happened. You seem to have a typo ...

    Feb 11, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Ruby of Revenge [Part 2]

    Me again! :P I can already tell that I'm going to be super useless here, so be prepared. Okay, so I thoroughly enjoyed reading this piece. I remember the pace ...

    Feb 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 1.1, Edited 1]

    Wassup, my home dawg 8) The plan is to review this bad boy for you, and then move on to Ruby of Revenge because hey, why not? Plus I have ...

    Feb 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Ohana Means Family chapter 3

    Ohhidere. I'm on a violent reviewing spree right now, so figured now was a good time to come and review this for you (before I deflate and lose all motivation). ...

    Feb 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Void - Chapter 5

    Hello again! :P I have to say, I think this chapter was definitely one of my favourites. It's not like anything groundbreaking happened, but it was written very well and ...

    Feb 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Action / Adventure Re: Post-perpetual - II (rewritten)

    I HATH ARRIVED. Sorry this is a little late, I actually did stuff with my weekend for once so didn't get much of a chance to sit down and write ...

    Feb 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Blotted Out - Chapter 2.2

    I'm baaaaaaack :P So there wasn't heaps and heaps that happened in this as it was all still about Maggie making her way downtown through the tunnel, so I may ...

    Feb 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Glass & Ashes 2/2

    'Sup 8) I'm so glad you posted this because I was worried you never would, and all of my shoe-related questions would never be answered

    Feb 9, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: Ohana Means Family~ Chapter Two

    Me again! Not a hell of a lot has happened in terms of plot progression here as you've focused more on character development (which I like, it's a good thing!), ...

    Feb 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Blotted Out - Chapter 2.1

    I hath returned! (there is no escape) Ooooooooh okay, so he got all dramatic and revelationesque (100% a word, don't question it) because those blokes will be after her. Got'cha. ...

    Feb 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Blotted Out - Chapter 1.2

    ohhidere. I'm kind of out of it today (no idea why, I'm just a bit weird like that), so I apologise in advance today if this review is lacking a ...

    Feb 5, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Void - Chapter 4

    Okay so I wasn't going to review this now because I'm meant to be doing uni stuff, but I was naughty and read it anyway (don't tell my seminar tutor) ...

    Feb 4, 2016


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