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  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: War of Dawn - Chapter 5

    I'm baaaack :P in, the queen of the UK ?!” Yay me. Not literally, I'm not an island floating around in the British Isles. Small note, most people actually say ...

    Mar 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Void - Chapter 9

    'Sup :P I want to begin by saying I loved the way you pulled off the flashback, to present, back to flashback scenes. They flowed wonderfully, and reminded me that ...

    Mar 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Post-perpetual - Interlude

    Here I am, at last! :P Also, you should totally feel honoured because this review will be my 950th, and therefore the one that grants me another red star. You ...

    Mar 2, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: War of Dawn - Chapter 4

    I'm back :P I have to say, this is probably my favourite chapter so far (I realise this is only the third, but hey). You've got some action, great character ...

    Mar 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: War of Dawn - Chapter 3

    Hey again! :P Apologies for taking a little while to get to this, it was my birthday last weekend and I was pretty busy and blah blah blah. Alas, I ...

    Mar 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Knight's Gauntlet Chapter 2.1

    Me again! :P This post is a really nice length, by the way, so thumbs up to you on that. Having read through this, I fear I may be a ...

    Feb 24, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Void - Chapter 8

    My lecture got cancelled (yay!), so I figured I'd come and review this with my newfound free time! I'm really enjoying these rehab chapters, I must say. I really feel ...

    Feb 23, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Blotted Out - Chapter 4.1

    Look at me, here all early and stuff. I fear I won't have a hell of a lot to say about this chapter because there was pot progression, and new ...

    Feb 23, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Bounty: I

    Hey there, grandpasslippers (I also love your username), I'm here to leave you a good ol' review! As someone who doesn't generally read this kind of thing, I enjoyed it ...

    Feb 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Knight's Gauntlet

    Hey there, CodyKnight! Oh, of course, welcome to YWS! I hope you're settling in well here, and be sure to let me know if you've got any questions or comments ...

    Feb 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Blotted Out - Chapter 3.2

    It feels like I've taken decades to get to this, so I'm really surprised it's actually only been a few days. How peculiar. BUT HEY. As soon as I had ...

    Feb 22, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Void - Chapter 7

    Hey zmith, here I am again :P It's such a shame I'm the only one following this because it deserves more, plus I always worry I might be blathering on ...

    Feb 21, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: Reverie: Chapter 2: A Rather Curious Girl

    'Sup. Sorry I'm getting to this so late, I've had a super busy week! Ugh, I love the name Oliver, like, you don't understand. The second novel I wrote had ...

    Feb 21, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Chapter 1-- The Rest Stop From Another Dimension (Stories from Wayward Suburbia)

    Hey there, I'm in the process of procrastinating like crazy, so here I am! :P Oooooo so I liked this. I'm not usually that into this kind of genre and ...

    Feb 17, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: The Void - Chapter 6

    Heya! :) I don't know why you don't like this chapter because I really do. I like that we're moving on and seeing something a little different because things were ...

    Feb 17, 2016


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