SimonCowellLuver

Hi i see a grammar error let me point it out to you ok.' "Smoothly do they glide Smoothly do they set The stars upon them twinkle Infinitely set " ...

Hello my dear this was great even though i don't know what Los Malos is. But very good i like the little smilies in between it was cute. :smt068 Totally ...

Camellias As I lay in my field of camellias, I think about the years I wasted. Captivated by your loving touch, a lullaby for a heartrending finish. Sing to me ...

First off what is the rating i hope no rating or rated R for content. I like it but a little emo and cliche trust me i know emo because ...

Awesome great work. Like he said if you get bad comments the only person who half to like the story is you! Not us but you. Your a great writer. ...

“’Kay,” I said, turning back towards Emily. I think you should just put "OK" instead of "Kay" because it sounds better and it is kind of quicker. That's my opinion ...

I like your poem because it has a nice rhythm to it. Which i really like. XD I don't think there is any crtiquing needed on this poem. Just to ...

Yeah its a little cliche and emo but i like it. it isn't half bad even though emo and cliche are 2 things i hate very much indeed. But well ...

I like it fiorst off thank you for making it easy to read because some stories are really hard to read because there are no spaces in between paragraphs. Also ...

I am here to say that your story was ok but cliche. Also the picture was a little odd for a moment there. Kind of creepy.LOL Well i think you ...

I like this it is very well planned and written. It must of taken awhile for you to think of it. Did it take you awhile to put this together? ...

Hey. I am saying that the story was kind of hard to read so can you double space paragraphs. Ok next thing i really liked it. But if you don't ...

Hello. Ok let me get to the nitty gritty ok. This is good but a little much cliche. But I hate the reptition of the lines though. That is my ...

Wow! i have to say. It is a lot to take in man. It is way to cliche. I like it but it is cliche. I think you should change ...

You have been writing a lot of poems lately and i haven't that is because i am saving my points. I really like it but like what miyaviloves said that ...