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Re: crow
Ello I am SimonCowellLuver. I didn't really like it that much. There is no emotion into it. In poetry you should have some kind of emotion not just plain old ...
Mar 29, 2008 -
Re: Mask
Hello October Girl how are you? I am fine. I like your poem it is very good but this one paragraph was similar to the song "Because of You" By ...
Mar 28, 2008 -
Re: Who Do you want to be?
Hello I am SimonCowellLuver I really like your ittle poem or story you got here it had a graet message with it and I agree with it totally I really ...
Mar 27, 2008 -
Re: love
now my heart is clear i love you my dear. you make me laugh,you make me smile, you even kiss me on the cheek every once in a while. when ...
Mar 25, 2008 -
Re: Some Where Out There
I like it but you need punctionuation it seems to be one run on sentence if you don't add commas or periods to start off. Also I didn't really like ...
Mar 25, 2008 -
Re: Deleted
Salve. I am SimonCowellLuver and I am hear to say that your little poem here is pretty good matter of fact. But the title i think has nothing to do ...
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: Painful Silence
Ello or Salve I say. I am SimonCowellLuver. I really like your poem it is very well written I only saw one tiny problem. I do the grammar correction problems ...
Mar 24, 2008 -
Re: Frozen In Time
Enblematic poetry is poetry written in the shape of what it's talking about. Take a wild guess what shape my poem is in. [pre]A picture can freeze a moment in ...
Mar 23, 2008 -
Re: Heaven and Hell
Hi its SimonCowellLuver how are you? Ok the first stanza was gret matter of fact. But i had some problems with the secon one... Hell, a place of hate and ...
Mar 22, 2008 -
Re: Racism
Hey Its SimonCowellLuver what up? Ok your little poem you got here is pretty good but i have some questions about it. It is kind of short. Short is ok ...
Mar 22, 2008 -
Re: Feeling Ash
I really like your poem you got here or story i don't know or can't tell because of the structure it is kind of confusing because some stories are in ...
Mar 22, 2008 -
Re: Cornelia
I like what you got here its pretty cool. I know this is off topic but in my Latin class all of our stories are based off of Cornelia and ...
Mar 21, 2008 -
Re: Perfect Sin (Provisions)
Hi I am SCL or SimonCowellLuver. I am here to say your poem is very good I love it but I saw some grammatical errors so i am going to ...
Mar 21, 2008 -
Re: Kill me (because our love hurts)
Hey girl what up! What you got here is awesome and it is very good. I only saw some few problems so let me get them for you... I fell ...
Mar 16, 2008 -
Re: The Things I Could Write About
You are a good writer. Not bad what you got here. I only found one mistake which is... Or of beauty that my poems shall make last In words alone, ...
Mar 15, 2008
