SimiDeJoie4
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This is a highly inspirational poem. It talks about a person filled with doubts, so unsure of his or herself, focusing only on the negative side. The poet is bringing ...
Dec 9, 2021
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This is what I'll call Simple and Sweet. I like the way it feels like lyrics to a song. Please, sing it if you can. Repetition made the promise of ...
Dec 7, 2021
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This is a lovely poem. I like the way you use good imagery to describe various seasons. It's perfect! I don't know if the 'No' is a kind of refrain ...
Dec 7, 2021
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I really enjoyed the poem. I like the way you weave different religions together to pass a message. The ' accidents of apostles', ' faulty prophets', and ' careless fathers' ...
Dec 5, 2021
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I'm new to the reviewing thing but take this in good faith. Good work. It's is a conversation between two people. The first to line ten and the second starts ...
Dec 19, 2019
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Hey,I'm new to the reviewing thing but I will try my best. Amazingly great. I noticed a lot of spelling errors like 'feinds' instead of friends,'jelous' instead of jealous. Well,maybe ...
Dec 19, 2019
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Nice work,I must say. Planning of writing my first review in YWS. Here is a chance. In the first paragraph,I quote 'and once the light when out'. I believe you ...
Dec 19, 2019
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