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  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: More

    This is a highly inspirational poem. It talks about a person filled with doubts, so unsure of his or herself, focusing only on the negative side. The poet is bringing ...

    Dec 9, 2021

  • Poetry » Health, Realistic
    Re: I Will Always Stand by You

    This is what I'll call Simple and Sweet. I like the way it feels like lyrics to a song. Please, sing it if you can. Repetition made the promise of ...

    Dec 7, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Mother Earth

    This is a lovely poem. I like the way you use good imagery to describe various seasons. It's perfect! I don't know if the 'No' is a kind of refrain ...

    Dec 7, 2021

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other
    Re: The Missionary's Folly

    I really enjoyed the poem. I like the way you weave different religions together to pass a message. The ' accidents of apostles', ' faulty prophets', and ' careless fathers' ...

    Dec 5, 2021

  • Lyrics » Romantic, Lyrical
    Re: Love Regrets

    I'm new to the reviewing thing but take this in good faith. Good work. It's is a conversation between two people. The first to line ten and the second starts ...

    Dec 19, 2019

  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, General
    Re: Single pringle life.

    Hey,I'm new to the reviewing thing but I will try my best. Amazingly great. I noticed a lot of spelling errors like 'feinds' instead of friends,'jelous' instead of jealous. Well,maybe ...

    Dec 19, 2019

  • Short Story » Literature, Lyrical
    Re: To the monster under my bed

    Nice work,I must say. Planning of writing my first review in YWS. Here is a chance. In the first paragraph,I quote 'and once the light when out'. I believe you ...

    Dec 19, 2019

Words are pale shadows of forgotten names. As names have power, words have power. Words can light fires in the minds of men. Words can wring tears from the hardest hearts.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind