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  • Poetry » General, General Re: More

    This is a highly inspirational poem. It talks about a person filled with doubts, so unsure of his or herself, focusing only on the negative side. The poet is bringing ...

    Dec 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: I Will Always Stand by You

    This is what I'll call Simple and Sweet. I like the way it feels like lyrics to a song. Please, sing it if you can. Repetition made the promise of ...

    Dec 7, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mother Earth

    This is a lovely poem. I like the way you use good imagery to describe various seasons. It's perfect! I don't know if the 'No' is a kind of refrain ...

    Dec 7, 2021
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Other Re: The Missionary's Folly

    I really enjoyed the poem. I like the way you weave different religions together to pass a message. The ' accidents of apostles', ' faulty prophets', and ' careless fathers' ...

    Dec 5, 2021
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Love Regrets

    I'm new to the reviewing thing but take this in good faith. Good work. It's is a conversation between two people. The first to line ten and the second starts ...

    Dec 19, 2019
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, General Re: Single pringle life.

    Hey,I'm new to the reviewing thing but I will try my best. Amazingly great. I noticed a lot of spelling errors like 'feinds' instead of friends,'jelous' instead of jealous. Well,maybe ...

    Dec 19, 2019
  • Short Story » Literature, Lyrical Re: To the monster under my bed

    Nice work,I must say. Planning of writing my first review in YWS. Here is a chance. In the first paragraph,I quote 'and once the light when out'. I believe you ...

    Dec 19, 2019


The opposite of belonging is fitting in.
— Dr. BrenĂ© Brown