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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Daddy, Where Are You?

    Hey, Snickerdooly! It's a really beautiful poem as a whole, and I figured I would go through it with you and tell you my thoughts over individual pieces. Rough calloused ...

    Jun 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Worth It ?

    Hey there hopeispeace!(: I'm a fan of poetry and really enjoyed reading this. What I liked most was how much it made me think, especially those first few lines. I ...

    Jun 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Brothers

    Hey there! This was a really sound, grammatically correct poem that I enjoyed reading. I really liked the opening line! It's what drew me in to keep reading, so nice ...

    Jun 9, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Need You Now

    Hey there glitterbox! First off, I want to say that I really enjoyed reading this because of how easy it was to relate to and because you made your feelings ...

    May 18, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Welcome to Hell

    I'd just like to let you know that I really liked this poem, espcially the way you used color to separete statements that were connected at the same time, if ...

    Jun 11, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: The Wrong Eyes

    I enjoyed that a lot! It kept me pulled along the whole time, and I liked the whole fast forwarding thing. It made it seem like he had been planning ...

    May 17, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: The Trials

    Hey there bandgeek, I'll be your reviewer. I'll get right to the meat of the section: Rain’s eyes stung, her running legs were a throbbing red, her black hair smoked, ...

    Mar 6, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Unforgettable: A Tale of a Disney World: Prologue and Ch. 1

    Hey there! This morning I randomly clicked on Entertainment for some reason and saw your question about how many people really liked Disney. I read about your story and was ...

    Dec 23, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Mythical Idiots

    Hey, I know what you mean when you say "This'll probably just stay my same feraky brain dump" or something like that. I always wind up writing a couple chapters ...

    Dec 22, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: How to Live - Chapter Four

    I'm so glad you messaged me! :) Ugh, I really need to get on here at a decent hour so I can give a full review for you. You really ...

    Dec 21, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Toilet Humour (2)

    Why won't you keep it up? I don't have enough time to really review it, but I've read all of your stories so far, the Rape Tunnel ones and these ...

    Dec 17, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: MoonStrike (prologue)

    Hey there DarkSpiral! So your prologue was in a success in the fact it really did draw the reader in. Considering how short it was (which is completely okay for ...

    Dec 1, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: You Say Can't, I Say Can 1): highlighting various disorders

    Hey! I just wanted to say thank you for informing about these different disorders that are very much out in our world! I would also like to add though that ...

    Nov 29, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Breena (Nine)

    Hey there, I'd just like to let you know that your story was so well done that I just read all nine chapters of it in one sitting. What can ...

    Nov 24, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: first part of my novel. no title yet.

    Hey there, I'm not going to be harsh, just pretty depth :) My name is Parker Carrington. I’m short. Alright, so, if you were an average reader, would these sentences ...

    Nov 21, 2009


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