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Re: Daddy, Where Are You?
Hey, Snickerdooly! It's a really beautiful poem as a whole, and I figured I would go through it with you and tell you my thoughts over individual pieces. Rough calloused ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Worth It ?
Hey there hopeispeace!(: I'm a fan of poetry and really enjoyed reading this. What I liked most was how much it made me think, especially those first few lines. I ...
Jun 29, 2011 -
Re: Brothers
Hey there! This was a really sound, grammatically correct poem that I enjoyed reading. I really liked the opening line! It's what drew me in to keep reading, so nice ...
Jun 9, 2011 -
Re: Need You Now
Hey there glitterbox! First off, I want to say that I really enjoyed reading this because of how easy it was to relate to and because you made your feelings ...
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Welcome to Hell
I'd just like to let you know that I really liked this poem, espcially the way you used color to separete statements that were connected at the same time, if ...
Jun 11, 2010 -
Re: The Wrong Eyes
I enjoyed that a lot! It kept me pulled along the whole time, and I liked the whole fast forwarding thing. It made it seem like he had been planning ...
May 17, 2010 -
Re: The Trials
Hey there bandgeek, I'll be your reviewer. I'll get right to the meat of the section: Rain’s eyes stung, her running legs were a throbbing red, her black hair smoked, ...
Mar 6, 2010 -
Re: Unforgettable: A Tale of a Disney World: Prologue and Ch. 1
Hey there! This morning I randomly clicked on Entertainment for some reason and saw your question about how many people really liked Disney. I read about your story and was ...
Dec 23, 2009 -
Re: Mythical Idiots
Hey, I know what you mean when you say "This'll probably just stay my same feraky brain dump" or something like that. I always wind up writing a couple chapters ...
Dec 22, 2009 -
Re: How to Live - Chapter Four
I'm so glad you messaged me! :) Ugh, I really need to get on here at a decent hour so I can give a full review for you. You really ...
Dec 21, 2009 -
Re: Toilet Humour (2)
Why won't you keep it up? I don't have enough time to really review it, but I've read all of your stories so far, the Rape Tunnel ones and these ...
Dec 17, 2009 -
Re: MoonStrike (prologue)
Hey there DarkSpiral! So your prologue was in a success in the fact it really did draw the reader in. Considering how short it was (which is completely okay for ...
Dec 1, 2009 -
Re: You Say Can't, I Say Can 1): highlighting various disorders
Hey! I just wanted to say thank you for informing about these different disorders that are very much out in our world! I would also like to add though that ...
Nov 29, 2009 -
Re: Breena (Nine)
Hey there, I'd just like to let you know that your story was so well done that I just read all nine chapters of it in one sitting. What can ...
Nov 24, 2009 -
Re: first part of my novel. no title yet.
Hey there, I'm not going to be harsh, just pretty depth :) My name is Parker Carrington. I’m short. Alright, so, if you were an average reader, would these sentences ...
Nov 21, 2009
