Silverdragon150

Hey there! I enjoyed reading this. I especially liked how you used a fairly typical set up- adventurers walking into a bar in a fantasy kingdom- and both played to ...

Hey! I'm a long-time Star Wars fan and I'm glad I decided to read this. It has a good concept- What if Luke acted differently in the final battle? I ...

I like how you set up your premise and then coasted through to deliver your meaning in only four stanzas. I think it flows really well, and you have a ...

I haven't done poems for a while, and I'm not an expert, but I like how your poem is less about an actual scene and uses more of the abstract ...

I enjoyed reading this short story. It was your title that drew me in, it is a very fitting title. I love how you have the tough truths in the ...

I enjoyed reading this short story. You wrote it quite well, it has a good amount of description. You set up the little boy's situation very well, and I like ...

Well, this certainly has a bit different flavor than some of your other poems, Dawneh. But I must say, that makes it no less interesting. It's a wondering poem, with ...

Huh. So the second paragraph especially wasn't quite what I expected. I like how you described the town and the castle in the first one, a few spelling mistakes here ...

O_O Oh my goodness, it's even epicer than when I last read it. Dude! Addeh, I simply can't wait to read more! I want to know so much more about ...

8D I remember this! It's still so awesome! Especially since I actually know what it's getting into. Darn, I'm gonna need a new nickname to call you... I loved reading ...

Well, at least she told someone! And yes, Greg seemed the good option. But wait- he's sick? Oh my. It makes me wonder what really happened to the other two ...

Finally! I've been waiting a long, long time to read this. You have me freaking out about it all over again! But now..... Okay, this is a very interesting development- ...

At the beginning, it reminded me a bit of when you write in a journal. Like you're sort of talking to yourself, or people you think can't really hear you. ...

Hey there! I saw this was also by you and decided to chack it out. Once again, it's short simple, but I believe that's all that's required here. It says ...

I was glad to read this. It's short, true, but it's okay- it's simple, and could be made into something longer and stronger but doesn't have to be. I like ...