Sillia

Sillia here! I'm here for another review :) Sorry for reviewing six chapters in but I thought you'd appreciate a speedy review lol. Anyway onward! Aside from the typical grammer ...

Sillia here! So I really liked this story :P It's really good and it has a very good draw to it. There were a few things that I saw; small ...

Sillia here! This is my third review in a few years so forgive me if I'm a little harsh and/or miss some things! I’m sorry. Two simple words that hold ...

Sillia here! So; pardon me for not reading any of the other parts (I'll go back and read em) I just felt bad cuz no one was reviewing and I ...

Sillia here :) Overall, I really liked this piece and am really interested to see where you go with it :P Also pardon me, this is my first review in ...

Sillia here! She was an English nerd with a knack for my Grandmother’s crime novels, and I was a techno geek who dreamed of becoming a filmmaker. Neat! One tiny ...

Sillia here! Of all the problems a world could curse one with, boredom was low on my list. Hmm...the sentence seems a little off.I can get where you're going with ...

Sillia here! In the ground were recent footsteps going up. “Was someone already here?” she thought in her mind, but that thought floated away as her consciousness of how her ...

Sillia here! So overall I really like this story! There are some tweaks that I would suggest, not nessesarily at any one point but something to keep in mind throughout ...

Sillia here! He can faintly hear the screaming of sirens. So nice wording so far, intresting that you are using present tense instead of past, there are not a lot ...

Sillia here! Some background This is not my first account on this site, rather, it is my second. I created this account so that I may start over. My writing ...

Sillia here! “Because you’re an irresponsible idiot and Mikhail here” –here he pointed to a short albino who squeaked and wilted at the mention- So i already like where this ...

Sillia here! Every time, I’d always think to myself, I’ve never thanked Pete for getting me all riled up about the prospect of crossing a streak of red ribbon called ...

Welcome to YWS! I hope this review helps :) Its pretty good so far but there are a few things that could be fixed up or approved upon. I I ...

Hi, Sillia here. Okay...honestly...this is way to dialogue heavy. There's really no description. Like where are they driving past? what does Barbino look like? Readers generally like to be able ...