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Reading through this, there are definitely some strong positives. Alternatively, there are also some negatives, but none are incredibly drawing on the story. To start off, I felt that while ...

A well executed piece. It's certainly well written, succeeding in conveying the character's sense of anticipation, then nervousness, and finally settling in sadness. I especially appreciate how the re

A fantastic story. Not only is it well written, but it manages to convey several different shades of emotion in such a short time. I've read a lot of poor ...

An interesting premise. The meta is frequently used for humorous intent, and rarely ever for seriousness or dramatic purpose. That withstanding, the writing in this piece uses the concept exceptionall

An intriguing opening. It's quite funny, I missed the segment in the description that clarified that that characters are actually anthropomorphic, so I was fairly confused about that whole bit ...

I love it. I love it all. In all honesty, I do happen to have an unhealthy addition to the morbid, especially when it comes to poetry. And stuff like ...

When writing poetry, I tend to shy away from using dialogue. However, I think you used it to excellent dramatic effect. It definitely helps emphasize the surrounding imagery. I am ...