SilentRain

Well, I liked this, but I think it needs work... I remember when we would run into the forest, the memories . Because he gave up. Now I am stuck ...

Well, I don't know what to say... The poem has a good theme, but you didn't carry it out... and this is were I pick it apart... My world is ...

Hello!! Thanks for requsting a review, I love this!! I didn't read the title until the end, so I didn't know that this was inspired by them, but when I ...

Aww!! This is sweet! I really liked this poem! Not much I can find wrong with it, other then what has already been pointed out, so... She slumped into the ...

I liked this, I liked how you told what you were afraid of sharing and then what your afraid will happen if you don't share though things. Only one thing ...

I liked this poem a lot. At first I didn't think it would be about religion, but then farther in I understand what it is that you are writing about ...

Hello, I liked this poem, a lot actually. It is nice, going from what you think will be a sad poem to a romantic poem... Got a suggestion though. You ...

Wow, I like this, though there are a few things I'd like to point out: Their is blood on the rug, on the dining room chairs, streaked up the walls, ...

Hello, Well, theres nothing really I would change about this. I like the rythem and the topic. I haven't read a poem like this before, I like the origanality of ...

This is nice, simple and nice. Your lips of fire- lips of passion On the lips of mine; Blazing. You use "lips here in every line but the last, try ...

Hello, I like this poem, the way you right it is good, though there are a few things I have to suggest: Without a second thought my routine I will ...

Wow, this is kinda intresting to say the least... I laughed, I bawled You choked, and stalled, I waved my hand up, I couldn’t breathe- I like these lines, though ...

Hello, This is a nice poem, short and sweet and worded nicely... there is honestly nothing about this poem that I would change, it is very well writen... You will ...

Thanks for requseting a review! Fisrt off I'd like to say that I really liked this poem, normally a poem like this would come off as nothing but meaningless rambles, ...

Thanks for requesting a review! Okay, just going to start by saying that this poem made me cry... Just saying... Okay, so, here goes, Sleep evades me as I replay ...