SilentRain

Thanks for requesting a review! I liked this poem, it was pretty good, could use some work though... The blank paper, white, a relief. Blue lines crisp and clear. I ...

Thanks for requesting a review! So, I'm not sure I like this poem, it has a good theme, and it is worded nicely, but it seems kinda like it needs ...

Thanks for requesting a review! First off, the poem is okay, it could use some work, but it is okay... So, this poem is original, and I'm glad you gave ...

Wow, Just Wow... Okay, while reading this, I began to thing "this is nice, a poem about a beautiful butterfly that will have its beauty fade it in time of ...

Wow, I really like this poem. The rhyme scheme is great, makes it read nicely and flow wonderfully. Would you be scared if you knew there was nothing after life? ...

Hello! I really like this poem! The only thing wrong I could find is a few comas that don't need to be there... The image they see , is not ...

Ok, you do NOT need those comas... When you are putting a coma in your wrote read though it and when you see a coma, you pause briefly, if the ...

I like this, its straightforward and easy to read. I also think that you should add more of what you feel to this... Like how it felt to burn, how ...

I like this but I also think that you write more, the end just doesn't seem like the end... Now I don’t have a heart to give away That is ...

I have done this so many times, some times I just wish I could get up a scream at them! I like the poem though I think you could make ...

Truthfully, I liked the other versing of the poem better. In this it seems as if you are just taking questions and answering then, trying to get people to understand ...

Ok, here is how I think you should break it up... Ever have a friend who you thought you could trust? Who you thought would never embarass you? < right ...

Wow, I really like this. It makes me smile to think imagine someone reading a sad poem and wanting reach out and try to comfort the writer... I agree with ...

I Love this poem, it is so sad, really deep, and full of emotion, which are my favorite poems! I wonder what made you write this? Is there a loved ...

I like this poem, a lot! I like the first and third stanzas the best. I like that the first staza talks about life will end and yet time will ...