SilentOllie

The emotion behind this poem was true, and I felt the hurt that you yourself was feeling. The poem itself was good, the format and flow of rhythm wasn't the ...

I liked this poem, I know that the words and feeling put into it can relate to many other people's lives today. Like others who commented before me, yes the ...

Like the others before me who commented on your poem, I found it quick, and straight to the point. The beginning was sweet, yet predictable the questions that someone may ...

Wow! This poem was told with a lot of heart, and it flowed so nicely that it was a pleasure to read. When you mentioned "Georgia", I've never been there- ...

Stranger in My Eyes was a sweet and sad poem. And it told a story that's similiar to many other peoples' out there. I like how you posed this person ...

Well first off, I'd like to say that this poem really spoke what I felt inside about someone. Your word choice was well picked, and it was lengthy. However, you ...

This poem, really surprised me I have to say. When I first saw the title. I thought it'd be about something 'happier' then what you described and said instead. The ...

This poem has a nice depth of emotion and feeling to it, but I find the rhythum- and flow to it is a bit off- and that made it harder ...

This poem was...interesting =D It told a nice story, but not the most original I've read/heard. However, I'm one of those people that never get bored of the "Cinderella Story..." ...

Aw...this poem really spoke to me. The sweetness, and almost the tone of innocence shone through. It was simple, and there weren't any complications, and I don't question what you ...

This poem portrays a romantic, and sweet setting in my mind when I read it. I like the last part when it talks about how they walk side by side ...

Oh dear, well I'm just saying ahead of time- I dont want to sound like a party pooper, but the Twilight Series aren't the "best books ever written" or such. ...

Your three haiku's are very simple, and sweet. The last one- about how nature cannot be captured in three lines made me smile. Because it's true- and yet people try, ...

L-o-v-e has a strong emotional feeling to it when I read it. However, some of the word choices- like when saying "I’m not a first timer at this.but it feels ...

This poem seemed very dark in the beginning for me; but the sadness reflects in an almost peaceful, and accepting way- which evens it out really nicely. I've personally never ...