Silberfee

Hi, I was initially attracted to your poem because of the title and the poem was exactly how I thought it would be. I interpreted it as a conflict that ...

Wow. I like the style, at first I was expecting to be alienated because of the foreign words at the beginning 'Sathalha'/FTL/Sargon...' but the style of writing is laid back ...

Reading it for the first time this piece seems too rambling. Instead of writing it in one long paragraph you could split each topic into a paragraph. For the first ...

Hi Aries! Your novelette idea sounds interesting and I am interested to see how it pans out. It is consistent, has paragraphs, punctuation and a good rhythm. The ending where ...

Hi anngelalu! I really like the simplicity of the poem and its shape , which reinforces the feeling of the speaker by keeping the speaker's feelings to the left hand ...

Intricately detailed but I'm not so sure about the third stanza, is it alluding to people blinding themselves into believing their portrayal of themselves as someone who leading a perfect, ...

I just want to ask what is the purpose of the lack of capitals? Does it symbolise the consistency of the relationship? Apart from that I find the poem very ...

I like the repetition and consistent rhythm (apart from 'There is a little girl in the corner of my mind that has tried so hard to only be pushed down ...

In a moment so infinitesimally small, in the stillness of a long, drawn-out night like any other(,) while my heart felt dread and fell cold as stone, he spoke But ...

Hi Morrigan! I am a new member so my review may not be as detailed as others. Firstly I want to say how much I love your poem, I admire ...