Sierra

Nice. I like the repetitiveness, and the emotion was really good too! I like that the narrator was an assassin, the hesitation, everything. :) Sierra

Awww, this is sweet. I like how you captured the confidence of a girl in love, and how sure she is that everything will work out. Because it's true, we ...

Hahhaha. I love the ending. So very much :D

Oh my god. Oh my god. I think this is one of of the best (if not the best) things I have ever read on here. Oh my god. You ...

This is weird. I like it :)

This is wonderful. I loved it. The first part of the first chapter didn't really tie in smoothly into the rest of the chapter, but other then that it was ...

I saw you had no comments, so I just decided to post one for you, even though I've already edited this chapter :)

Ooh, I absolutely loved this. So much. It is exactly the kind of thing I love to read and the story is incredibly intriguing to me. I loved this entry ...

Mmm, very good. I am a bit confused with how the whole thing ties together, but other then that it was great.

Oooh, this was wonderful!! I definitely want to read more. The entire thing was absolutely wonderful. I have no nitpicks what so ever. Sparkles, Sierra

Wow. This was just . . . wow. It was wonderful. I loved the emotion and the description. I agree with theotherone, that the last sentence was a kind of ...

Oooh, this was really good. Very dramatic. I loved the raw emotion. Remember to capitalize the first letter of every sentence, not just the first letter of every stanza. Sierra

Wow. Just wow. This was awesome. You nailed the emotions very well. Keep writing :)

Wow. This is amazing!! I love the emotion and your writing style is wonderful.

Thanks for your awesome reviews, everyone!!!!