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Aviator: Thank you. Hey, I'm glad to know I'm not the only one going through this crap... Zelithon: Thanks! Haha, being a wimp is underrated... I'd never thought about the ...

Snip Snip: Heyy, thank you. Yeah, it's a bit short, but I didn't know what to add to make it longer. Adding stuff sometimes spoils it, so I wanted to ...

So, what I'm going for is unexpected, but easily imaginable? I wanted to avoid giving any advice since it's only my opinion, and an opinion that seems to differ from ...

Psh, of course it's humorous! With words like "Gooblegog," how could it not be? I agree that this was well done--very creative and vivid. Post more soon!

Thanks for the reply... Snoink. I guess I'm just unedumacated when it comes to literature of the 1800s, or something. I mean, I recognized that the author was going at ...

Shadowdancer: Hey, thanks! I will definitely take your comment about the caps into consideration--a few people on a different site suggested the same thing, but I dunno. I wanted that ...

Snoink: Haha, thanks for the clarification on the whole Jesus'/Jesus's thing. I will take your word for it. I am a little bit confused as to why the adjectives in ...

I am not much of a poetry afficionado, but I really did like this. I've felt like this before. A lot. Nice work.

Awh, this was sweet. Very well done. Just out of curiousity, what does your dad do for a living?

Kayleigh: Hey, thanks! I was beginning to regret giving this the title it has, so I appreciate your (and Dusky's) comment. Bob: I asked my english teacher today which was ...

Yeah, I always feel like I need toadd in a little footnote when I talk about my brother's autism in stories--just because not a lot of people have been exposed ...

Wow, thank you! I will definitely look into playing around with the wording so that the 'you's and 'I's make sense. However, I would like to leave the brother part ...

Wow. I can't even write a sentence without using the letter 'e', but you wrote this entire story, going above and beyond by packing it with emotion and wonderful imagery. ...

Wow. WOW. Thank you all SO much for the reviews! I'm sorry I couldn't have thanked you sooner--I wasn't even aware that my silly little story was recieving this attention. ...

Ah. What is with you two and naming poems after songs/bands? Then again, I really shouldn't be talking... At any rate, your second explanation for the title (and thunderstorms "fall" ...