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Re: The Painted Crab
This is such a compelling story. A little kid with much more compassion for a small animal than an adult who has the actual power to give that animal a ...
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Re: Aeliana’s dreams
Okay, this is definitely interesting. I know I remember you writing about laughing Jack before, I can't remember exactly in what context, but either he's busy tormenting a bunch of ...
Jun 21 -
Re: Stay up
This is an interesting short story. I'm guessing that there is a lot more to it than just what is wrote here, but it almost gives a normal feeling to ...
Jun 21 -
Re: Alyssa’s desires
Okay, this is interesting. It's incredibly short, but since you have links, I'm guessing this is only part of the story. From what I can tell, Alyssa is very troubled. ...
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Re: Prologue: Do I Even Matter
I'm guessing this is an excerpt from a book you're working on. If it is it's got amazing potential, you've definitely got a way with words. I love how descriptive ...
Jun 6 -
Re: Celine’s origin
This is an interesting story. It really captures the point of view of an elementary school kid who doesn't understand what he/she did wrong. And the plot of the story ...
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Re: Insane
This is a fantastic horror story. The way you opened up with just a normal, mundane day for a teenager really set the story up. You also were very clever ...
Oct 11, 2025
