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  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, General Re: The Painted Crab

    This is such a compelling story. A little kid with much more compassion for a small animal than an adult who has the actual power to give that animal a ...

    Sun Jun 21, 2026 10:40 pm
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: Aeliana’s dreams

    Okay, this is definitely interesting. I know I remember you writing about laughing Jack before, I can't remember exactly in what context, but either he's busy tormenting a bunch of ...

    Sun Jun 21, 2026 10:30 pm
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Other Re: Stay up

    This is an interesting short story. I'm guessing that there is a lot more to it than just what is wrote here, but it almost gives a normal feeling to ...

    Sun Jun 21, 2026 10:22 pm
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Supernatural Re: Alyssa’s desires

    Okay, this is interesting. It's incredibly short, but since you have links, I'm guessing this is only part of the story. From what I can tell, Alyssa is very troubled. ...

    Sat Jun 06, 2026 11:00 pm
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Prologue: Do I Even Matter

    I'm guessing this is an excerpt from a book you're working on. If it is it's got amazing potential, you've definitely got a way with words. I love how descriptive ...

    Sat Jun 06, 2026 10:52 pm
  • Short Story » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Celine’s origin

    This is an interesting story. It really captures the point of view of an elementary school kid who doesn't understand what he/she did wrong. And the plot of the story ...

    Sat Oct 11, 2025 5:07 am
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Horror Re: Insane

    This is a fantastic horror story. The way you opened up with just a normal, mundane day for a teenager really set the story up. You also were very clever ...

    Sat Oct 11, 2025 4:35 am


I like to create sympathy for my characters, then set the monsters loose.
— Stephen King