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umm...what was this suppose to be? It looked more like a letter.

hehehe...liked it!!

I definately liked the style too buddy! A well done piece of work.....Keep writing! And ofcourse don't forget to post them cuz we all love reading them.:)

hmmmm...would like to see the edited part.

hmmmmm....would like to know teh meaning of surely does tell that it has a very unique meaning to it....but sorry can't figure it tell me.:)

hehee...ya poetry is weird!

yeah where are the Roald Dahl books? My vote to Harry Potter series.

Nah didn't read 'The gremlins'.

Thank u Gymnast.....

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Thanx everyone! Mad:The spacing didn't really mean something.I just layed out trhe poem in that manner...lol...I know thats craziness..lolz Good to get the comments. ~Ani~

I liked it, simple short and sweet.

Hey! commenting on ur work after a long time. And as always I liked it.... thats a nice piece... ~Ani~

Thanx Shadow! Thanx chocolatechipmuffin...mmmm may be i got carried away too.

I liked this poem. I don't think so you need to change anything here. Well done! But yes where are the puntuations? Keep writing!