Sherri

Hello! Thank you for leaving a review; I really appreciate it! :) Woops XD That's me, typing too fast. I'll fix that typo right away, thank you! And yes, that's ...

Thank you!! :) I really appreciate it! And yes, if you haven't read any of the previous chapters, the second part to this one would be very, VERY confusing. XD ...

I believe this should have been labeled under 'comment', not a 'review'. :)

Hi Chirave/Maddie! I love your new username; it's very beautiful. :D I'm glad you decided to come back to the story; I know I've been going a bit slow, and ...

I don't think tagging works in reviews, kiddo. xD Thanks for mentioning me though... This is a really, really good poem! :D

Yeah, I love it when poetry can capture emotion like that :D Your poetry has a lot of emotion in it as well; it makes it seem all the more ...

Thanks donizback :D I really appreciate it! Uh... a lot of practice xD That, and I wrote this during a rough patch in my life. Poetry like this usually comes ...

Thanks Donizback :D

Thanks Elder :D I appreciate the review! Um... No... the kid doesn't have a name yet (I'm working on that). I mean, I have one planned, but there hasn't been ...

No problem, Elder! Thanks so much for sticking around and reviewing! I really appreciate it :D Good luck with your writing and analysis! Class papers can be beasts, but I'm ...

Yay! Mario! :D Thanks Maddie! I really appreciate it! :) Well... since it is just a strengthened metal (hyper-iron) it was a small jab, but I was thinking as I ...

You caught it :D And yeah... since I was just messing around with this story in the first place, I've stuck in a few rip-offs of stuff I've found interest ...

Thanks so much for the review, Maddie :) I really appreciate the feedback! Yeah... Maira wasn't so popular... which is to be expected, given her personality, but still. I'm glad ...

Not a problem at all! You're a pretty good writer; I enjoy seeing new poets pop up with some talent. It's refreshing to see someone pay attention to details :D ...

Thanks so much, Elder! :D Pretty much all of the questions you listed here are actually answered in what I've written so far of the next chapter, so I'll leave ...