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Shearwater

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Humor Re: A Beauty Never To Be Seen - Prologue & Ch. 1

    Hi, there! I'm a little bit late to this review, I'm sorry but I'm here now. Firstly, I do like the premise of this story, it's intriguing. I recently watched ...

    Apr 15, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Teen Fiction Re: Unbroken, Chapter one, part one.

    Dudette, I'm here to review. I apologize for my tardiness but if you have any complaints, I suggest you take them to Skins because I had to review her chapter ...

    Apr 12, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Dramatic Re: Stop and Stare (Part 1: rewrite)

    Hey, Freak! Sorry I'm a bit late with this review but I was busy studying for that stupid exam. Anyway, I'm here now and I'm ready to give you the ...

    Apr 12, 2012
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Just itself

    Hi there! I'm here to review your poem. Now, I'd like you to take into consideration that I'm not normally much of a poet so excuse me if I come ...

    Apr 9, 2012
  • Short Story » Technology, Dramatic Re: Cold Coffin

    Hey, Whisperer! Sorry it took me a few days to get to this, I've been trying to do all review in order in which I receive them. Anyway, I'm here ...

    Apr 9, 2012
  • Short Story » Literature, Realistic Re: Motion in a Minute

    Hey there, Threnody! I'm here to review! So, to begin with, I do like this piece. I like the contrasting personalities that you display between both the characters and I ...

    Apr 9, 2012
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Demons are Bad

    Hey, Mia! It's me, your father! I'm sorry for being a little late to the party but after reading this, I really wish I was able to read and review ...

    Apr 7, 2012
  • Short Story » General, Dramatic Re: No Haven of Mine (Stop and Stare segment)

    Freakkkk! I am here to review this and god, I feel so good about it! I need Skins’ writing on YWS to keep me grounded. You are my ball and ...

    Mar 22, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: Redemption [Chapter 1]

    Hi! I'm here to review this lovely piece for you. ^^ I'm going to begin by saying that this was nice, I like the chaos that was blended in with ...

    Mar 5, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Round 2: Be Nimble 1

    Hi, Volant! I'm here to review! So, I do have a few things I want to say about this piece and I'll start with the good. I do like your ...

    Feb 23, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: The bittersweet life - Chapter 1

    Hey, Shin! I'm here to review this chapter for you. So, to get started, I have a few quotes here that I want you to look at. "Even though she’s ...

    Feb 20, 2012
  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: Wanderlust.

    Hey, Jas! Thanks for the request! So this is a pretty tiny piece of literature so this review might be a little on the short side as well. However, I ...

    Feb 18, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Travia - Prologue

    Hi there, Up&Out! Thanks for the request! Firstly, I'll start by saying that you have a pretty nice style of writing. It's not perfect but it's unique in a sense. ...

    Feb 17, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Breena (Fifteen)

    How do you manage to capture my attention even after two years of not writing? How? I found myself enchanted with this chapter and felt like I had picked up ...

    Feb 16, 2012
  • Novel / Chapter » Satire, Humor Re: Jun the Hoverbus Driver, Chapter One (maybe)

    Hey Kafka! Pink here. :) So I stumbled upon this while browsing for something to review and decided to just do a quick short overlook of this. That said, I ...

    Feb 4, 2012


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