~Gone from existence~
Hey, Shin! I'm here to review this chapter for you. So, to get started, I have a few quotes here that I want you to look at.
"Even though she’s got warm shinobi* clothes, she’s trembling, trembling from worry over him - an inner injury in his left shoulder, fading consciousness, his breathing burning her neck skin."
"The horse lets out a short scream as something hits it; it falls down dead, the two dully hit the ground in front of it."
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