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Re: Adjusting to the Dark- Chapter 2 (1st draft)
Hey there crazy person, Pink here as requested! Let's get started with this review :D "I hope your not busy today because Coach Joe wants to do an extra practice," ...
Jan 14, 2010 -
Re: A Demon Sits Behind Me at School
Hi Pudin! Pink here as requested! :) I have to say, I really like your idea so far. Hopefully you can build upon this and make it catchy and fun! ...
Jan 13, 2010 -
Re: The Last Storm (4)
Alright, I finally got here. So most of the things have been said so I'm going to just give you my opinions on this. So far, it's intriguing but yes, ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Ignore this
Hi Molly, Pink here as requested. Alright, so I'm going to start off by pointing a few things out and we'll see what goes from here... :arrow: Grammar : Alright, ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Breena (Fourteen)
Alright, I finally got here. They shook it my hands, or my hands shook them, it was hard to tell. Do you mean 'they shook in my hands?' That was ...
Jan 10, 2010 -
Re: Of Loss and Love (chp.8) [newly edited]
Rawr, I'm here. Okay, on with the review! A few Nitpicks/Suggestions I slowly opened my eyes and as they adjusted to the light coming from the windows I saw that ...
Jan 9, 2010 -
Re: A Winter's Walk
Hi there July, Pink here to do a quick review. As I walk upon the icy lanes enveloped in snow and see the trees so white and bare their branches ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Tomorrow is You
Hi Olya Prepodobnaya, here to do a quick review. What is tomorrow without your embrace? A parody on life Taken from me that smiling face So easier to die I ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: The Last Storm (3)
Eek, sorry for the delay! But here's the review, as promised :D Alright, most of the nitpicks are picked out already so I'm basically going to do an overview review ...
Jan 5, 2010 -
Re: Chessa & Aidenn
Hi Addawen! I'll review this one for you today. My mother let out an exasperated sigh. “She doesn't believe me.” she said to the older man. Okay comma after me, ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Delicious Destruction
Hi Loveless, Pink here. I'm going to do a quick review for this because it sounds so appealing. Haha (seriously) :D There giant, fluffy, banana nut bodies walked up and ...
Jan 2, 2010 -
Re: Lady Death 1
Whoo! I'm first! It took Dreico a few seconds before realizing why the person screaming was familiar to him: Tya! I like the name Dreico :D She was on the ...
Jan 2, 2010 -
Re: Breena (Thirteen)
Yay! It's finally here! :) And to top it all off, my nose itched. “Mother f-” I'm sorry but when you PMed it to me, I laughed so hard on ...
Jan 2, 2010 -
Re: Dream Catcher [ch 4] a portion of it
Hi Shina, it's me again. Alright, so I'm still a bit confused but oh well, I'll try my best! :D These are just suggestions: Relief shows through her half smile. ...
Dec 31, 2009 -
Re: Dream Catcher [ch 3] a portion of it
Hi Shina, Pink here! Alright, although I have no idea what's really going on, I think this is good. I could not find anything to nitpick on so yay! You ...
Dec 30, 2009
