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Shearwater

  • Short Story » General, General Re: Silver Rose

    Hi Condi, Pink here. I'll be reviewing this piece for you today ;) But first...welcome to YWS! Hope you like it here :] Oh, and I give penguins to new ...

    Oct 3, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: The Bubble That Did Not Burst

    Hi Young gun, Pink here. Nitpicks/comments Tired as i was from the tennis practice I had, Watch out for your "I". Be sure to capitalize them. I hit the shower ...

    Oct 3, 2010
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Read Once Immediately Preceding Sleep

    Heya, Pink here. I remember crossing this by a while ago but never actually got around to reading it. But I have to say, I'm extremely glad I did. This ...

    Oct 2, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: REVISED CHAPTER ONE

    Hi Kana! Pink here, I'll be reviewing this for you today. Nitpicks/comments I flew softly along the wind currents, my shocking black and silver feathers glistening in the frigid morning ...

    Oct 2, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: I'm Coming Home for Christmas *Edited*

    Hey Eli, Pink here :) For your opener, it wasn't exactly pulling me in. Your descriptions were nice but it lacked strength. Plus, as Rosey had already stated, you do ...

    Oct 2, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Rubber Immortal, Part Four

    Hi Hannah! Sorry I'm so late with this review. I had planned on doing this yesterday but I was called in to replace someone at work so...you know how that ...

    Oct 1, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Lather and Nothing Else- rewrite

    Hi dreamy! Unfortunately, I've never read "Lather and Nothing Else" by Hernando Tellez. So, I won't be able to give you a great review on this. But I have taken ...

    Sep 30, 2010
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: "Your Story is About..."

    Hey Jenthura! Pink here! :3 Fist of all, I have never read Issac Asimov's "The Bard" so...yeah. But I decided to review this piece anyways because it captured my interest. ...

    Sep 30, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Rubber Immortal, Part Three

    Hi Hannah! Pink here :3 Nitpicks/ Comments The type almost melts onto her skin like a temporary tattoo. What do you mean by type? Her tears are almost their catalyst ...

    Sep 29, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Road Not Taken(1)

    Hey Shubs! Aw, I'm not first :( Oh, well, here to review! Thanks for the pm, by the way :3 Nitpicks Her lips, painted with dark raspberry shade curved into ...

    Sep 28, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: The mary-rose society book 1:lormerls realm

    Hello Pointe, Pink here, as requested :D First of all, I welcome you to YWS. As a gift, I'll give you a penguin! Anyways, on to the review! *The first ...

    Sep 28, 2010
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: A flower

    Hi Singdawg! Welcome to YWS! *throws you a penguin* It's for you ;) So I'm Pink, I'll be reviewing this piece for you today, hope you're alright with that :) ...

    Sep 28, 2010
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Chapter Ten)

    Hey Skins! I'm first! Whoot! :3 Nitpicks As I stepped out of the car, every single part of me regretted doing so. Why would she regret stepping out of the ...

    Sep 28, 2010
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Rosewood (working title)

    Muahaha, I love the name BadNarrator XD *Ahem* Pink here, dropping by for a review :) Nitpicks The boy knew he had to keep it out of sight or else ...

    Sep 27, 2010
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: deleted

    Yuri! I didn't know your wrote poems :D So, I'm not much of a poet but I shall review your piece, nonetheless. It's the least I could do for the ...

    Sep 27, 2010


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