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Re: String Theory
Well, I happened to cross this poem last night. I was going to comment, but I thought I'd wait to see if anything clicked in my head and save my ...
Oct 12, 2010 -
Re: The Perfect Devil: Chapter 5
Hey, Pal. Sorry for the late review. Anyways, nitpicks and stuff first. I could see many shapes that were recognizable but in the distance I saw them the eyes, only ...
Oct 11, 2010 -
Re:
Why Hello, Strange :) Pink here, I'll be reviewing this for you today. Oh...you're new? Well, welcome to YWS! I give Penguins to new members, so here is yours. Alrighty, ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: White Paint -- Excerpt from Action Novel
Hello, Gheal! I'm here to review! Sort of of, I mean, what can I possibly review from just a small excerpt but I will do my best nonetheless. Most of ...
Oct 10, 2010 -
Re: The Beach
Hi Palip! Pink here :) Well, look at that, both our names start with P lol. Coolio. Well anyways, I'm here to review! So, you mentioned that this an assignment ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: A Shot of Arrogance (Chapter Eleven)
Hey Skins! I'm here to review, like what else? lol Well, I don't have much nitpicks, sadly. I know, you're so upset that I don't have any nitpicks that you're ...
Oct 9, 2010 -
Re: Light and Shadow - Chapter 3
Hey Whisper! You finally got around to posting the next chapter, I was actually afraid you stopped writing this :( But I'm glad to hear that's not the case! Well, ...
Oct 8, 2010 -
Re: The Law of Moses
Hi DEin! Pink here :) So, welcome to YWS! Penguin for you! Now, back to the review... "Don't you worry now, my beautiful," I whispered to the doll. "More is ...
Oct 7, 2010 -
Re: Silent (or Sooner or Later)
Hi Xun, welcome to YWS! You get a Penguin! I'll be reviewing this for you today ;) No one ever notices the girl standing by the wall who’s so quiet, ...
Oct 7, 2010 -
Re: Till Death Do Us Apart-(Prologue)
Hey Lily! Shubhi! Whoot! A collab :) I want to do one too, you make me jealous lol :3 So, anyway, I'm here to review, ;) (what else) Nitpicks/suggestions If ...
Oct 6, 2010 -
Re: Shadow of the Dawn
Hi Life, Pink here! First of all, welcome to YWS! Penguin for you :3 On to the review! Nitpicks/comments The heat crept through the soles of my boots, the faint ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: Yellow Light, White Page
Hi Gheal! Pink here, dropping by for a review :3 First of all, welcome to YWS! A sleeping penguin for you ;) Well, back to the review :3 In the ...
Oct 5, 2010 -
Re: A Small Dog's Major Problem (Deleted)
Hey Yuri! Pink here, yo! It's about time I pay you back, eh? lol Nitpicks/comments “Neither do I.” The sudden sound cringed the dog, that made its small pointy ears ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: Guardian Angel
Hi Meg! Pink here, to review! :3 So, I haven't read the reviews before this so if I state things twice, I apologize. Anyways, I'll go through a few nitpicks ...
Oct 4, 2010 -
Re: Her Molten Core - Chapter 1 (16+)
*gasp* Snoink posted something. Must review :3 Right in front of me was a man wearing a black t-shirt, about five sizes too short, How can a T-shirt be too ...
Oct 4, 2010
