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Re: At the End of the Day, Part 1
Hey Tawsif! Just here to leave a short review! I hope I don’t offend, it is never my intention. First of all, this hooked me from the beginning! The narration ...
May 26, 2019 -
Re: war of the gods
Hi seekingthetruth, I’m just here to give a short review. I hope you are not offended by any of my comments, it is never my intention. This is a wonderful ...
May 26, 2019 -
Re: Fallen Soul- Chapter Two
Hello starryknight, I’m just here to give you a review! I hope you are not offended by my comments, it is never my intention. Please take my comments into consideration! ...
May 26, 2019 -
Re: Chapter 6: Contract
Hi! I'm here to give some helpful tips, and my feedback! I'm sorry if I offend you in any way, it is never my intent. First of all, this is ...
May 24, 2019 -
Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 1
Hi Evander! Just here for a quick review. I am sorry if I offend, it is never my intention! First off: I love this! I love it so much and ...
Jul 5, 2018 -
Re: The Three Lockets [Chapter 1.1]
Hi Saen! I wanted to come and review your LMS novel. You don't have to take any of my suggestions, of course, but I hope you take them into consideration. ...
Jul 3, 2018 -
Re: A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 1.1
Hi Pan! Sheadun here for a quick review! First off: I really liked this plot! I always love these type of books. They keep me entranced. Your writing style and ...
Jul 2, 2018 -
Re: EarthFall Ch. 1
Hi! It's SheaDun here for a review :) (PS. Welcome to the site! Hope you love it!) Overall, great novel here. Wonderful plot line. Reminds me of other dystopian novels ...
Jul 2, 2018 -
Re: A Merry Band of Monsters [V2] - Chapter 5
Hi! This is my first review in months! Happy to be back. First off, I love this! I just jumped right in, not having read the other chapters, but really ...
Jul 2, 2018 -
Re: Broken Oathbrothers
HI MJ! I am here to review this, per your request :) I thought this was a really great story, with an amazing twist at the end. I only have ...
Aug 16, 2017 -
Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter One)
Hi there Scribbeinks! I am going to read and review your novel, and I hope that you read the corrections and take them into consideration on your journey towards your ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: The Murders and the Mysterious Effigy... (1)
Hey there Eros! I am here on this fine review day to look over your work! Great start with this novel. I am very interested. To start off with the ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Hunter: Chapter 1.1 - Agrona [Edited]
Hello! I am here to review your novel! I hope that you take my advice into condsideration and revise your work in the best way possible. First off, what a ...
Jun 25, 2017 -
Re: Planet of the Electric Moon Part two
Oh hey Felistia! I'm here to review the second part of cute lil Pendars story! I really glad that you posted the second part of this so the first part ...
Oct 30, 2016 -
Re: Planet of the Electric Moon Part one
Heyyy felistia! I'm super excited to be reading this, as the plot and title sound really interesting! First off, I really liked this! Great character development, plot, and writing style! ...
Oct 30, 2016
