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  • Short Story » General, Realistic Re: At the End of the Day, Part 1

    Hey Tawsif! Just here to leave a short review! I hope I don’t offend, it is never my intention. First of all, this hooked me from the beginning! The narration ...

    May 26, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: war of the gods

    Hi seekingthetruth, I’m just here to give a short review. I hope you are not offended by any of my comments, it is never my intention. This is a wonderful ...

    May 26, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Fallen Soul- Chapter Two

    Hello starryknight, I’m just here to give you a review! I hope you are not offended by my comments, it is never my intention. Please take my comments into consideration! ...

    May 26, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Realistic Re: Chapter 6: Contract

    Hi! I'm here to give some helpful tips, and my feedback! I'm sorry if I offend you in any way, it is never my intent. First of all, this is ...

    May 24, 2019
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: Death's Servant - Chap. 1

    Hi Evander! Just here for a quick review. I am sorry if I offend, it is never my intention! First off: I love this! I love it so much and ...

    Jul 5, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: The Three Lockets [Chapter 1.1]

    Hi Saen! I wanted to come and review your LMS novel. You don't have to take any of my suggestions, of course, but I hope you take them into consideration. ...

    Jul 3, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: A Pocketful of Posies - Chapter 1.1

    Hi Pan! Sheadun here for a quick review! First off: I really liked this plot! I always love these type of books. They keep me entranced. Your writing style and ...

    Jul 2, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: EarthFall Ch. 1

    Hi! It's SheaDun here for a review :) (PS. Welcome to the site! Hope you love it!) Overall, great novel here. Wonderful plot line. Reminds me of other dystopian novels ...

    Jul 2, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: A Merry Band of Monsters [V2] - Chapter 5

    Hi! This is my first review in months! Happy to be back. First off, I love this! I just jumped right in, not having read the other chapters, but really ...

    Jul 2, 2018
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Broken Oathbrothers

    HI MJ! I am here to review this, per your request :) I thought this was a really great story, with an amazing twist at the end. I only have ...

    Aug 16, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter One)

    Hi there Scribbeinks! I am going to read and review your novel, and I hope that you read the corrections and take them into consideration on your journey towards your ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Murders and the Mysterious Effigy... (1)

    Hey there Eros! I am here on this fine review day to look over your work! Great start with this novel. I am very interested. To start off with the ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Hunter: Chapter 1.1 - Agrona [Edited]

    Hello! I am here to review your novel! I hope that you take my advice into condsideration and revise your work in the best way possible. First off, what a ...

    Jun 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Planet of the Electric Moon Part two

    Oh hey Felistia! I'm here to review the second part of cute lil Pendars story! I really glad that you posted the second part of this so the first part ...

    Oct 30, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Planet of the Electric Moon Part one

    Heyyy felistia! I'm super excited to be reading this, as the plot and title sound really interesting! First off, I really liked this! Great character development, plot, and writing style! ...

    Oct 30, 2016


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