Shauni

Hey there Lite! Shauni's here, pleasure to meet you! Right, so, I'm not the best one to review poems. Actually, I suck but I think we all should get a ...

I actually enjoy long chapters; they fulfil me more but eventually, they make my desire reach dangerous amounts. I'm not the most accurate person to review you grammatically and in ...

Hi Kakaly! I'm Shauni and I'm here to answer your request! I'n not actually a very critic person, just because I'm a bit lazy but I'll gladly help you! There ...

Hi silented! I must warn you, I'm not very good at poetry but I'll do my best! Here I go: The first time I read you poem I enjoyed it ...

Sweet Meep! Long time no reading The Ol' Great Blind! I noticed some stuff that could be polished. I'm sure that you don't write in a while so, it's normal ...

Hi Elly! Pleasure to have you on the YWS! :D Have you checked the Welcome Forum?!? If not, check it only on monday... Anyways...let's review rhis. Just a thing, I'm ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS, hope you are liking it so far... Now, I liked this, it's interesting. It's very clear, expressive and has simple idea. You concentrated everything in ...

Hi there! I can see you are new here, welcome to YWS!! We are all very nice here, did you already went to the Welcome forum? If you didn't go ...

Hi there! This is nice but it needs to be polished. When we read you work, I will be sincere, it's boring, too long, to much talking. As darko.demark666 said, ...

Hi there! Okay, I didn't like this poem so much as the others that you have. I agree with darko.demark666, it's sounds a bit pushy... Don't take me wrong, it's ...

Hi there! I liked this, as you said it is not very special, but it's cool! “Listen here you bitch and listen carefully. The Ashleys have dibs on the Peytons, ...

Hi there! I can see you are a novice (me too :?, but that doesn't matter ). Welcome to YWS, hope that you liking it so far, people were are ...

Hi there! I liked it, it was... different. I'm looking forward for the others chapters, I got curious to see how this rolls. But I found some things I'm not ...

Hi Explosive_Pen (or Eliza, you choose), I really enjoyed your writing. It's very mature of yours and i know many of us (YWS writers) feel the same (I, particularly do, ...

Hey, so it has been a while since I posted anything from this story. It was kind of on stand by. So, here is chapter 4. not really sure about ...