Shannon

Super good! Loved it :D

I love this! lol will remember this one, my little sister has been wanting a hamster but I wonder if this will change her mind *evil chuckles* ;)

Exactly! Haha. :D

David Tenant is the Uncle Jake in my mind. :) it just feels right. Except for I can't picture the red hair.

:D awesome! You're super talented plz put next chapter up soon too. This is a fantastic story.

*crying with frustration * nooooo! :'( in that case, I guess I can wait. Plz post next chapt. soon. Bye

Awesome! As Thor would say, Another! (Sorry that was geeky :P) i can't help it, I really assume things fast. Is the fox the wizard, or the girl, or just ...

Awesome story, sorry I don't have time tonight for full review but I hope you post the next chapter soon. :)

Can u review your own poem? I'll try, buy, dye...I want to see if you can earn review points from yourself, shelf, elf. It's fun to run, under the sun. ...

Ok so I live in Shasta County Northern Ca and the descriptions you gave were so good. I totally understand that one part about the twisty mountain roads. I hate ...

I am living for next chapter! Plz continue. Biggest fan

Oh thank you so much! I totally forgot to change will to with, lol. Thanks for the review and I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

Thanks so much! I see what you mean, I'm grateful for the review and I'll keep working on it. :)

Wow super good, I can't wait to read the next part. You are really good at making the moment tense and exiting. Thumbs up!