ShallowHouse

I SPAT OUT MY ASPIRIN WHEN I READ THAT COACH WILL HAUNT YOUR DREAMS! I'm very sorry for scaring you with coach and I'm glad you're enjoying the story and ...

Thank you for the review! I'm very happy for the extensive review and for pointing out my characters' dimensionalities! I guess taking anime roots has its own downsides!

Thank you for noticing the tempo! That's what I focused on instead of syllable count! Thank you also for the advice. I actually pondered whether to put a comma or ...

Thank you for this extensive review! I barely write poetry and I am suuuuper open to what reviews have to say! I didn't know that repetition, when unneeded, as much ...

Thank you! While poetry isn't my forte, I enjoy making them when I do! I actually forgot the syllable count and instead focused on tempo so thank you for reminding ...

Thank you so much for the review! Yes, your review helped! I still have much to learn and I take note of everything I can do to improve! Thank you!

Thank you for the advice! I actually just wrote and published it after writing so I didn't polish it. I'm sorry about that! I'll make time polishing my future pieces ...

Thank you for the clarification! Also, great Inkarnate map! I'm still reading chapter 2!

Thank you for the kind words! Really, this is poem is really just me ranting my troubles away at the encouragement of a friend and while the wounds are still ...

Yay! I'm already reading chapter 2!

It's okay, silly! Thank you for the comment and will you believe me if I told you that your latest piece made me write that poem? It's true. And so, ...

HELLO, NECROMANCER! Seriously, I was in a serious, gloomy mood until I read your poem, thank you for lifting this poor trash's spirits up! I can't believe you wrote a ...

Thank you, Shay. And yes, I'm also a sucker for Hamilton and with this poem, I guess you could say that I'm "erasing myself from his narrative". Again, thank you ...

@honora, hello! Here's the next chapter if you wanna read it! Sorry if I'm bothering you!

Thank you, Jesse! I'm happy that you see nothing wrong with my work (I triple checked everything!) Also, yes, you're right: friendship is a very important topic in the story ...