ShallowHouse

I'll definitely do that! >:3

I'm glad you enjoyed the story! In all honesty, I based it off of a similar dream and upon waking up, it left me with questions that I, unfortunately, will ...

Thank you for the review! I am very sorry for the lack of resolution! I really didn't know what I wrote until I published it! ;w; But yes, I agree ...

Thank you so much for the review! Yes, Yumi and her entirety is definitely a reference to Japanese culture, with heavy reference to ghost in the shell! X3

Heyyo! Thank you for the comment and yes! There was a reason for the differing indentations! The devil is in the details, though I'm not quite sure whether I pulled ...

Thank you sooo so much for the review! Love, is kind of a commodity now, with all the dating sites and legitimate business where you can rent a boyfriend/girlfriend and ...

Thank you sooooo much for the review! It makes me really happy that you loved this story of mine and I'll try to keep at it! I guess I could ...

Thank you for the review! I'm glad you loved my story! I'll try to make more of these if I ever got the idea!

Thank you for the review, Kahlene! I'll try to keep making more of these since I also enjoyed writing these as well!

I'm glad that you felt for the narrator and that you enjoyed the story! I wanted to write a really grounded story and I'm glad it paid off! To answer ...

I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter!! And thank you for the critiques! They do help and I always want to improve so I can bring you the best stories ...

Well it certainly looks *mwuah mwuah Italian chef hand sign*! I love it too! You should make an art forum!

I'll take a read when you release it! I can't wait for it!

Ohoho, thank you so much for the review! For rightly guessing one of the inspirations for this story (FMA), I shall tell you that this whole story is based off ...

Thank you for the riveting review! I didn't take into consideration that people would speak differently under stress! Thank you so much for that! You are right! It's in a ...