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Re: Dr. Dolittle Week.
Really creepy, and really excellent.
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: On the run
Really good, very creepy and disturbing. This is every girl's nightmare, and you captured it. Really good.
Jul 2, 2011 -
Re: Fear-Scent
hmm, I'll work on it.
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Memories
Sounds really captures what a lot of people feel. I love it. I love the style you wrote it in, jerky and separated. Really, really good.
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Ephemeral And Hard Working - That's Me!
aww, poor ant! :) This was really well done and entertaining to read.
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: I'm Not The Hero
This is really excellent, and one of the truest things I've ever read. But some heroes aren't so brash--a lot of times, the real heroes are inconspicuous and therefore we ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Crimson love
This is really interesting...I'm guessing that she/he is speaking of their boy/girlfriend and the obviously wild love they share? It's good. I like it.
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Sacrifice
Crescent: Thanks. Your criticism makes a lot of sense. I'm glad you gave it. Am I allowed to edit it right now or do I need to leave it like ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: Beware Unkown
fantastic. I could read it over and over again. It's almost dark and despairing, but there's a tinge of hope as well. Really, really good. This would make any New ...
Jul 1, 2011 -
Re: My first poem in months
I really like this. It's abstract, and yet you get what's going on. I love the part about words on trees. Excellent.
Jul 1, 2011