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Hey Dude! I am here with the review for part two! And it’s the opposite of closed, ~ As I mentioned in my last review, you shouldn't start a sentence ...

Hey Dude! Here at last with your review. Sorry this took a bit. Lucian now engaged Radi both offensively and defensively ~ It seems to me that Lucian is progressing ...

Hey Stori! Here as promised! I've got your review! I'll give it to you, now... Okay, so I don't typically read books with talking animals. It's an interesting twist- I've ...

Hey Iddle! I was browsing, when, suddenly, my eyes fell upon the word 'Vipress'. Being rather fond of Vipers ;) I came to investigate. So, for your review! Tell him ...

Hey Jester! This is a really great poem! I really enjoyed it! :D I've been trying for a while now to figure out a way to say this, but it's ...

Hey Rainn! Thanks for requesting a review! I'll do my best to give you a good review on your poem. :) I really like the scene you set forth- calm ...

Hey Emm! Thanks for requesting a review! I hope you will find it helpful. :) I really like how you've integrated a rhyming scheme into your prose. It's a nice ...

Hey Dude! Here with your review for part two! Radi's voice reflected impatience and disdain ~ This sounds a bit 'telly'. Maybe "Radi's voice was impatient and dripping with distain" ...

Hey Dude! I am ridiculously excited about reading this chapter of your book. The suspense has been killing me- so without further dawdling, I will move straight into your review. ...

Hey Meg! For lack of a better way to begin my review, I'm merely going to state that I absolutely fail at introducing reviews. The pleasantries at the start of ...

Hey Xreigon! As promised, I am here, at "Dear Lacy"...Oops, I think I referred to it as "Dear Lucy" in my former post...disregard the 'U' and imagine an 'a' in ...

Hey Xreigon! I've never actually read anything like this letter before, so I'm not entirely sure how the best way to go about reviewing it would be. You've definitely written ...

Hey Meg! Sorry this is SO late. My computer, and my parents, and school are all collaborating against me-- but, I think, I should be able to give you a ...

Hey Meg! You are familiar with my reviewing style, so I'll skip the pleasantries, and get straight to the review... Cold, white marble spread out in a plain underneath the ...

Hi Meg! You've been warned about my reviewing style, so straight to the review... I really like the way you start this off- very interesting. Many kicked at the young ...