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Re: Sea of Gray (Ch. 1)
Hey Cas! I thought I'd attempt to return the favor of your review, now that you've posted a piece that is not completely outside my range. I vaguely remember giving ...
Feb 13, 2013 -
Re: Cast Iron Birdcage
Hey Emmylou! Shady here with a review. Your description is wonderful. Description is easily my favorite part about reading a work, and you've satisfied my curiosity. The woman you open ...
Feb 13, 2013 -
Re: Now We Are Free (Part 2)
Hey Egs! Shady back with your review for Part Two. :D And somewhere, an eagle ~ This is a pet peeve of mine, but I always advise against starting a ...
Feb 13, 2013 -
Re: Now We Are Free (Part 1)
Hey Egs! I'm here to review this piece for real. :D So...review: Firstly, your link didn't work. Of course, that wasn't a big deal as I simply searched the title ...
Feb 13, 2013 -
Re: Wisdomatch - Chapter One
Hey Kaz! Here with the review that you did , in fact, request. (I'm blind sometimes, sorry for for the messed up order of the reviews.) Since he obviously values ...
Feb 8, 2013 -
Re: A whole lotta luck part 1
Hey Onri! Shady here with your review. :) I tend to give grammatically focused reviews, but usually give a general overview at the end. Bear with me if this gets ...
Feb 7, 2013 -
Re: The Woods
Hey Ryffe! Shady here with your review! She would cook from time to time, although her biscuits and gravy sucked , she could cook a wonderful dinner. ~ That middle ...
Feb 6, 2013 -
Re: Wisdomatch - Chapter Two
Hey Kaz! Shady here with your review, as requested. As you know, I haven't followed this story, so please forgive any ignorance I may show as a result. Straight to ...
Feb 6, 2013 -
Re: Wasteland
Hey Mer! Shady here with your review. :) I see you're new here, so welcome. If you need any help, anything at all, don't hesitate to shoot me a PM ...
Feb 6, 2013 -
Re: Imagination
Hey Xiira! Shady here with your review. Grammar is my strongest bit, so I tend to give a line-by-line critique followed by my general thoughts of the piece. She had ...
Feb 4, 2013 -
Re: Ghost Trigger Ch.1 Part 1
Hey Ven! Shady here with a review for you. But in the darkness, a peculiar ringing would haunt me , until the sound of galloping... He wore clothes similar to ...
Feb 4, 2013 -
Re: (Old) The Border of Light 1 - Part Three
Hey Ary! Shady back with your last and final review (until you get more chapters up :D ). Right, so I’ve finally figured out that these final four bits are ...
Feb 3, 2013 -
Re: (Old) The Border of Light 1 - Part Two
Hey Ary! Shady back, yet again, with a review for the second part of your first chapter. There was nothing that couldn't be fixed with a warm drink, I thought ...
Feb 3, 2013 -
Re: The Border of Light, One
Hey Ary! I’m back with your next review, as promised. I must say that I really love your descriptions. They’re very good, and appeal to the emotions and the senses, ...
Feb 3, 2013 -
Re: The Border of Light - Prologue (Old)
Hey Ary! Shady back with a review, as promised. “ It was somewhere “There’s nothing wrong here.” she had told me, yet I kept pulling my mother’s sleeve repeating: “There’s ...
Feb 3, 2013
