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Re: The Wrong Era Chapter 9 part 2 (Second Draft.)
Hey Moalex, Shady here yet again for another review on this lovely story of yours :) Apparently when the world runs on virtual reality, the entire world would result in ...
Feb 7, 2018 -
Re: The Wrong Era: Chapter 9 Part 1. (Second Draft.)
Hey Moalex, I'm finally here for the promised review! Let's get to it... Needless to say, Ms. Reese was one question away from corrupting Cecilia…It took a couple of back ...
Feb 7, 2018 -
Re: The Wrong Era Chapter 8
Hey Moalex, Shady here to rescue (or at least put the first review towards the rescue ;) your chapter from the Green Room. I've not read your previous chapters, but ...
Feb 4, 2018 -
Re: The Mage and the Immortal Chapter 17
Hey Thundahguy, Shady here to rescue your chapter from the Green Room! I haven't read the previous chapters, but I'll do my best to over helpful feedback. I'm having a ...
Feb 4, 2018 -
Re: Hell or High Water (Chapter 8.3)
Hey scribbleinks, Shady here to save your chapter from the Green Room! I haven't read your previous chapters, but I'll try to give you helpful feedback anyway :) Hello, and ...
Feb 4, 2018 -
Re: Life's for the Living - Part 1
Hey chameleonyan, Shady here with a review for you! The first thing I noticed about your piece is how very long it is. It's hard to review pieces this long, ...
Feb 4, 2018 -
Re: Unsafe ~ Chapter 11
Hey dogsrule5, Shady here with a review to help rescue your lovely chapter from the Green Room! I haven't read any previous chapters, so forgive me if I critique something ...
Feb 4, 2018 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 22.2
Hey Querencia, Shady here with a review to rescue your work from the Green Room! I haven't read the previous chapters, but I'll do my best to offer helpful feedback ...
Feb 3, 2018 -
Re: Persuasive essay on Recycling
Hey TheBlueCat, Shady here with a review of your essay! Picture this: city streets covered in slimy, sticky junk with nowhere to walk. Skyscrapers, which you can't see because of ...
Feb 3, 2018 -
Re: Just A Teenage Mess
Hey TheLeakyPen, Shady here with a review for you! However, I still admire her. I admire her strength and ability to raise not one but two moody teenagers. To my ...
Feb 3, 2018 -
Re: Don't Threaten me with a Good Book
Hey ZeldaIsShiek, Shady here with a review for you! I must admit, I wasn't familiar with this song to begin with -- so I appreciate you giving the title of ...
Feb 3, 2018 -
Re: Food Puns Skit
Hey preston7, Shady here with a review for you! I noticed you're new to YWS - so WELCOME! I hope you're enjoying it so far, and if you ever need ...
Feb 3, 2018 -
Re: Message to a Person Who will Probably Never Read This
Hey Cinderquill, Shady here with a review for you! I wish I could say that and everything else that I’ve been wanting to tell you comfortably in person. But every ...
Feb 3, 2018 -
Re: LIBERTY: North Korea
Hey Laurenh6, Shady here with a review for you! This is a really fascinating essay that you wrote. It's very eye opening, though it does make me wonder about the ...
Feb 3, 2018 -
Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 53
Hey jamgalloway, Shady here with a review for you! I stumbled across this chapter on my mission to clear out the Green Room, and I don't really have time to ...
Feb 3, 2018
