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"you really do have the diet of a 7 year old with a liquor license" ~ Atticus

  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 13 of Princess of the Sea

    Hey lelu, Shady back with another review for you. Let's get started... Captain Swordfish ran up onto the deck, eating a swordfish sandwich for breakfast. Hm. I feel like you ...

    Feb 25, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 12 of Princess of the Sea

    Hey lelu, Shady back with another review! I think you're familiar with my style at this point, so I'll jump straight in... Silira slammed the latch shut on the last ...

    Feb 25, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Chapter 11 of Princess of the Sea

    Hey lelu, Shady back with another review, as promised heavily implied ;) I'll just jump straight into the review, since you should have a pretty good idea of what to ...

    Feb 25, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Chapter 10 of Princess of the Sea

    Hey lelu, I see you've got quite a few of these chapters hanging out in the Green Room. Since I'm already jump-started in on this story, I'll follow it along ...

    Feb 25, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 9 of Princess of the Sea

    Hey lelu, Shady here to rescue your work from the Green Room on behalf of the blue team. I haven't read your previous chapters, so forgive me if I miss ...

    Feb 25, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: David Speaks of Goliath: Blank Verse

    Hey Radrook, Fellow blue team member here to rescue your poem from the Green Room. A quick disclaimer, I am not fantastic at poetry, so take anything I say with ...

    Feb 25, 2018
  • Short Story » General, Humor Re: Operating Instructions

    Hey Cadi, Shady here with a review for you. And guess what, not just any review. It's my 400th review woot - woot ;) Anyhow, jumping in... I really liked ...

    Feb 16, 2018
  • Short Story » Literature, Realistic Re: On And On

    Hey SpaceSnickerdoodle, Shady here with a review for you! The night was dark. My rough, heavy breath puffed out in little icy clouds in front of me, the cool wind ...

    Feb 15, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: this generation

    Hey atalati, Shady here with a review for you! I really liked the imagery you used in this poem. It had a beautiful flow and your word choices are excellent. ...

    Feb 15, 2018
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: I Love You To Death

    Hey CreepyxMrspasta, Shady here with a review for your short story. I like how you started off. It seems innocent, a girl going through heartbreak as her boyfriend is becoming ...

    Feb 15, 2018
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Knny (No E's)

    Hey hattable, Shady here with a review for your short story. At first I was just very confused as to why in the world you wrote a story with no ...

    Feb 15, 2018
  • Poetry » Satire, Humor Re: Math Problems

    Hey leleparadise, Shady here with a review for you! First of all, I wanted to mention that the title of this poem is what drew me to it. I don't ...

    Feb 15, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: As I go once more to rest

    Hey coffeecat, Shady here with a review for you! I really liked your poem. It has a very nice flow, and I liked the imagery you used. I also liked ...

    Feb 15, 2018
  • Poetry » Romantic, Historical Fiction Re: The Line of Sea

    Hey elcuidador, Shady here with a review for your poem. I really liked the rhythm you had going in this piece. It flows very nicely and makes it easy to ...

    Feb 15, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 54

    Hey jamgalloway, Shady here to rescue this chapter from the Green Room. I believe I read the chapter just before this, so hopefully I have bit more context for this ...

    Feb 10, 2018


For in everything it is no easy task to find the middle ... anyone can get angry—that is easy—or give or spend money; but to do this to the right person, to the right extent, at the right time, with the right motive, and in the right way, that is not for everyone, nor is it easy; wherefore goodness is both rare and laudable and noble.
— Aristotle