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Re: Chapter 13 of Princess of the Sea
Hey lelu, Shady back with another review for you. Let's get started... Captain Swordfish ran up onto the deck, eating a swordfish sandwich for breakfast. Hm. I feel like you ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 12 of Princess of the Sea
Hey lelu, Shady back with another review! I think you're familiar with my style at this point, so I'll jump straight in... Silira slammed the latch shut on the last ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 11 of Princess of the Sea
Hey lelu, Shady back with another review, as promised heavily implied ;) I'll just jump straight into the review, since you should have a pretty good idea of what to ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 10 of Princess of the Sea
Hey lelu, I see you've got quite a few of these chapters hanging out in the Green Room. Since I'm already jump-started in on this story, I'll follow it along ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 9 of Princess of the Sea
Hey lelu, Shady here to rescue your work from the Green Room on behalf of the blue team. I haven't read your previous chapters, so forgive me if I miss ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: David Speaks of Goliath: Blank Verse
Hey Radrook, Fellow blue team member here to rescue your poem from the Green Room. A quick disclaimer, I am not fantastic at poetry, so take anything I say with ...
Feb 25, 2018 -
Re: Operating Instructions
Hey Cadi, Shady here with a review for you. And guess what, not just any review. It's my 400th review woot - woot ;) Anyhow, jumping in... I really liked ...
Feb 16, 2018 -
Re: On And On
Hey SpaceSnickerdoodle, Shady here with a review for you! The night was dark. My rough, heavy breath puffed out in little icy clouds in front of me, the cool wind ...
Feb 15, 2018 -
Re: this generation
Hey atalati, Shady here with a review for you! I really liked the imagery you used in this poem. It had a beautiful flow and your word choices are excellent. ...
Feb 15, 2018 -
Re: I Love You To Death
Hey CreepyxMrspasta, Shady here with a review for your short story. I like how you started off. It seems innocent, a girl going through heartbreak as her boyfriend is becoming ...
Feb 15, 2018 -
Re: Knny (No E's)
Hey hattable, Shady here with a review for your short story. At first I was just very confused as to why in the world you wrote a story with no ...
Feb 15, 2018 -
Re: Math Problems
Hey leleparadise, Shady here with a review for you! First of all, I wanted to mention that the title of this poem is what drew me to it. I don't ...
Feb 15, 2018 -
Re: As I go once more to rest
Hey coffeecat, Shady here with a review for you! I really liked your poem. It has a very nice flow, and I liked the imagery you used. I also liked ...
Feb 15, 2018 -
Re: The Line of Sea
Hey elcuidador, Shady here with a review for your poem. I really liked the rhythm you had going in this piece. It flows very nicely and makes it easy to ...
Feb 15, 2018 -
Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 54
Hey jamgalloway, Shady here to rescue this chapter from the Green Room. I believe I read the chapter just before this, so hopefully I have bit more context for this ...
Feb 10, 2018
