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Re: Kimandra Loval Chapter four
Hey Eve! Shady back with another review for you! I believe I reviewed chapter 5 a bit earlier, without noticing this one also sitting in the Green Room. So I'll ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: The Fey Conspiracy: Part 2
Hey Evander, Shady here with a review for you this fine review day. I haven't read part one to this short story, so I apologize from the get-go if I ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: Viggo's Break - Epilogue
Hey papillote, Shady here with a review for your epilogue on this lovely Review Day! I haven't read the rest of this story so this bit probably won't make much ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: Beautiful Pain Chapter 7.
Hey ThatGeekyGirl, Shady here with a review for you this lovely Review Day! Let's get started rescuing this chapter from the Green Room! “You are going home with Joshin. He ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: Chapter Five
Hey Eve, Shady here with a review for your chapter in the spirit of Review Day! My style tends to be to go through and mention specific things I notice ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: Bycatch
Hey Sonder, Shady here with a review to rescue your short story from the Green Room. My style tends to be to mention anything that catches my eye as I'm ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: Lacuna: "An unfilled space or interval; a gap"
Hey Biluata, Shady here with a review for your essay. I know you said it was for a school essay that was due really soon (and that was a long ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: Dark Crown - Chapter 1.2
Hey scarlettvee, Shady here with a review to rescue your chapter from the Green Room, all in the spirit of Review Day and, you know, crushing the Blue Team ;) ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: on the wire [part two]
Hey Pompadour, Shady here with a review for you! I haven't read the first part of this, so I might not make as much sense as I otherwise might have, ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 5
Hey MaxWagner, Shady here with a review for you! Anything I say is not intended to be mean or discouraging; my style tends to be to comment as I read ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 33.2
Hey Africa, Shady here with a review for you! I haven't read the prior chapters to this and I don't have the to back through to read the like 60 ...
Apr 29, 2018 -
Re: Forget to Smile
Hey Chaser, Shady here with a review for you. My style tends to be to got through and comment on whatever catches my eye as I'm reading, then give a ...
Apr 25, 2018 -
Re: The Risen - chapter two
Hey elysian, So not quite when I got home I might have forgotten , but I'm here now! Let's jump into the review! I stormed into my room, closing the ...
Apr 25, 2018 -
Re: A Day In The Life Of Molly Reed -Chapter 1
Hey EPICnumber1, Shady here with a review for you ~ One of the first things I noticed is that your paragraphs are a little long. That especially held true when ...
Apr 23, 2018 -
Re: Deep River-NaPow 3
Hey Katnes, Shady back with another review for you! Let's get started... Honestly I think this is my favorite poem of the three that I've read. It is very well ...
Apr 23, 2018