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Re: Grey- Chapter 2
Heya gruzinkerbell! I noticed you have this piece in the Green Room as well and given how much I enjoyed the piece I reviewed previously, I figured I'd swing by ...
Sep 29, 2024 -
Re: The Enigmatic Universe Theory: Interlude 1: Leolyn
Hey VioletSkies, Shady here with a review for you this fine Review Day, and wishing much Schadenfreude and Fahrvergnügen to you as I read through your chapter. I wake in ...
Sep 29, 2024 -
Re: Meadow's Aster: Chapter One: The Lepidopteran's Law
Hey gruzinkerbell, Happy Review Day and much Schadenfreude and Fahrvergnügen to you and yours! It's been well over a year since I've stretched my reviewing muscles but this one piqued ...
Sep 29, 2024 -
Re: A Sociological View of Child Suicide in the United States
Hey there! I am not very good at reviewing on mobile, but that’s all I have available to me right now, and you said this is due tonight, so I’m ...
May 16, 2023 -
Re: My Introduction for my novel. Does it hook you into wanting to read further?
Heya Fishr, I saw your wall post asking for reviews, so figured I'd give this a look! My review will likely be on the shorter side as this piece is ...
Mar 17, 2023 -
Re: Angie Stars Diary (Demo)
Heya Raven16, Welcome to YWS! I see you joined relatively recently, so please feel free to ask me or any other moderator (anyone with a green username) and questions you ...
Mar 7, 2023 -
Re: The Last Spell 11.3
Silv! Mad dash against the clock, let's go. Throwing in my obligatory Review Day Fahrvergnügen and Schadenfreude and then yeeting off to read -- “For the both of us, yourselves, ...
Feb 27, 2023 -
Re: The Last Spell 11.2
HELLO SILV I AM BACK AS I PROMISED I WOULD BE I have run out of clever introductions long ago and now am officially out of un-clever introductions so I ...
Feb 26, 2023 -
Re: The Last Spell 11.1
Heya Silv! Shady back again, as promised! I'm really excited to see the absolute disaster that I'm sure this meeting is going to turn into, what with the hotheads that ...
Feb 26, 2023 -
Re: The Last Spell 10.2
Silv! I have FINALLY found my groove and I have returned with another review for you this fine Review Day (here's your obligatory Review Day Fahrvergnügen and Schadenfreude, early this ...
Feb 26, 2023 -
Re: The Last Spell 10.1
Silv! Guess who's back, back again-- Yeah, yeah, lame, I know. I'll just go ahead and jump on into this Review Day review and see where you're taking us in ...
Feb 26, 2023 -
Re: The Last Spell 9.2
HI HELLO SILV
Feb 26, 2023 -
Re: The Steadfast Sandcastle 2/2
heya simpleJ, Shady back with another review for you this fine Review Day, as promised! I am excited to see how you wrap this story up and think I have ...
Feb 26, 2023 -
Re: The Steadfast Sandcastle 1/2
Heya simpleJ, Shady here with a review for you this fine Review Day. My style tends to be pointing out specific things as I read that stand out to me, ...
Feb 26, 2023 -
Re: Characters So Far
Heya Noth! Are you familiar with the ? You are of course more than welcome to post lit works like this one if you want to ^^ but generally, the ...
Dec 29, 2022