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Shadowolf here :D Interesting kind of story you have going on here! I have to say that its fairly well written, but for something as short as this, a little ...

Shadowolf here :D Great job on the story! "Father is a banker" Placing a 'my' before father allows for a smoother reading. As well as in the second paragraph, wired ...

Shadowolf here :D This is a well written piece of work you have right here. It flows nicely and evenly, allowing the reader to be pulled in even without it ...

Shadowolf here :D Ok, so it starts off wonderfully and ends the same way. Lovely, don't be surprised if you see me commenting or reviewing in the next part and ...

Shadowolf here :D Very descriptive and a lovely read! I have to say that I couldn't find anything that could do to be changed. The beginning starts off slow but ...

Shadowolf here :D Hi again! I have returned to read your work and give you some hints that are hopefully helpful. Well, here i go "don’t know if he’s working ...

Shadowolf here :D first paragraph in, "the miniature ridges blades against his body" to me this sentence doesn't make a whole lot of sense, as i do not understand quite ...

Shadowolf here :D A lovely, lovely read that I would love to see you continue. I don't have much to critique since it seems others beat me here too it ...

Shadowolf here :D Lovely story, really drew me in and i find that I enjoyed it very much. A few suggestions for you though. "Once you become somewhat recognized as ...

Shadow here :D I have to say that this was an enjoyable read and will be going over to read the rest of it, I have one question though. 'Anger, ...