ShadowQueen92

It was very discripted, but i didn't really understand what the poem was about. I'm probably just being stupid, but i just didn't understand. I don't want to sound rude ...

wow! kind of weird, but in a good way. I was kind of bland, I still liked it though. The only thing i would say to work on, is add ...

dramatic! wonderful! i don't know what else to say! it's an awesome poem filled with emotion! Great job! Can't wait to read more of your stuff!!! Again awesome poem!

fantastic! love the rhyming! Great job! can't wait for more!

awesome! loved it! keep up the good work!!! Can't wait to read more!

awesome! i loved it! keep up the good work!

Thanks so much I never thought of doing that, thanks for the advice. ^-^

This is one of my favorite stories that I've written so please be kind ^-^

I love it! Full of emotion and kind of funny, I really liked the ending! ^-^

Really cool. I totally know the feeling, I have major bad anxiety attacks. I hope your mom changes her mind. Can't wait to read more! ^-^

on the princess thing read the paper bag princess, not all princesses sit on their butts all day and have people wait on them hand and foot. I wanted jenna ...

Freaking amazing! I love it! ^-^

I'm probably going to sound stupid, but I didn't really get it. It was confusing :(

Very cool! it seems like your really know your history ^-^ good job!

this poem is awesome! full of emotion and descriptions!!! :D