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Haha, hey Ladybug! Happy reviewing! This was so funny! I completely agree, the book is very dry, and has an "old" feeling to it. When we had to read it ...

Hello there, pen! Happy review day. The first paragraph was phenomenal. Your imagery and sentence structure blew me away. "That leering, peering creep" is awesome! It provides a clear visual ...

Hello Ivan8050, happy review day! Ok, so whoa, first of all. The astonishing amount of capitals, and the astonishing lack of punctuation, well, it astonishes me. I think you might ...

Ahhhh, my favorite candyman! I'm really glad you posted this. It was beautiful, and your amount of imagery was astounding. It made me picture her eyes, and it was easy ...

Hi Stranger, Caterpickle here. You obviously have a lot of skill, a natural sort of...professional air to your writing. And not just this poem, but all the pieces I have ...

Hey there, Sword! This was a cool little story, I thought. It was a very windy road, that's for sure. I thought the way you told the story from Ricky's ...

Oh Pomp. How I wish I could write like you. This was so great and so packed with metaphors and beautiful figurative language. If every poem is a sand bucket, ...

Hiraeth!! Wow, this was completely packed FULL of emotion and pain and bitter unforgiving. There were few errors, and many great lines that should be in the book of great ...

Ooooh, Eros, this is really pretty. The end got me. I had seen on your wall, you talking about someone named Mohit, but this poem clarified it for me. It ...

Hi Ladybug. This poem could apply to the majority of the people I know (haha, only half joking), but one person comes to mind. I won't make you listen to ...

Sarge! Why do I keep finding your stuff?! I'm not stalking you, I swear. This was different. I mean, I've seen lots of the robot-overtook-humanity-sole-human-surviver thing, but this was a ...

Stranger, that was really good! I loved the kind of dark humor you put into every line. You managed to make me laugh and frown at the same time, which ...

Sarge! We meet again! And once again, excellent work! The names were unique, and the only thing that worried me, regarding the names, is that, if the reader doesn't know ...

Hey Arkhaion! This was very well thought out, and you obviously put a lot of effort into this short story. Some people might say that they don't like how you ...

Wow, anentityofpanic, this was so great! It was the perfect blend of telling anecdotes about the past, but also telling what's happening now. This was so creative, and obviously very ...