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Ok, 1, you only mention it being corrupt once, and two, you never clarified what exactly was happening. And also, now pointing out that he didn't have a weapon, if ...

Yeah I get that And btw you are literally the only person that calls Isugoro by Jin and I find it fantastic XD

Yay! I'm glad you'll be looking at the first book! Fair warning though, I started this series 3 years ago when I was 15, so it's gonna be pretty bad ...

No you're fine, I would've made the same mistake if I hadn't already been in the class ^^ I hope to see some more reviews on my book ^^

Lol I'm guessing you haven't been in geometry yet XD Proofs are geometry problems in which you're given the first part a problem and then the answer and it's your ...

Who knows, I mean, he was given that prophesy and still has it in mind..

Lol I was originally going to have him kiss her cheek, but after discussing the idea with a few people, it came about that it would of been out of ...

Lol it's fine ^^ If you do want to read from the beginning though, I gave a link as well, I think you'd like it Thanks

Would you elaborate a bit more?

This is the second book in a series, I said that before the start of the chapter. That's why there isn't much said on appearances or anything cause it was ...

If that is the case, than either above or below the actual work, maybe mention that this is part of a series, and maybe add links to the other pieces. ...

@jayflames1 it's just practice and knowing how to say what you're thinking in a very drawn out way lol

I'm glad to finally see your review! You brought up a lot of good points that I will definitely look at while I'm editing this. This is definitely a series, ...

Alright, the eyes thing off the bat is actually something I can't really explain at the moment because it's the first clue to something that happens down the road in ...

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. I hope you read the previous chapters, I'd love to know what you think. ~Maddie