Seraphinaxx

I've edited some of it and left some of it.

Yay another review :) Personally, I'm both not very good at and don't enjoy picking out the negatives in a piece of work, meaning my reviews are generally me commenting ...

Thanks for the review. :) I'm definitely going to be editing this.

I really hope Bethesda announce Dishonored 2 or Fallout 4 at E3.

Cool :)

It's not anything that ever happened to me, it's more an observation of society as a whole and how we don't ask and end up regretting it.

Thanks for the review. This is the first thing I've written in ages so i was worried my muse had deserted me. Yep Doctor Who is awesome. Beautiful creatures? Sorry ...

Thanks for all the positive reviews. I normally write fantasy and this was my first try at writing horror so I'm glad some people liked it. :)

Sorry if it was confusing for you. Rachel is Nathan's older sister and Kari is Rachel's only daughter and Nathan's niece. Nathan and Aria's relationship is a brother/sister one, not ...

Thanks for your reviews and support :)

I'll have more character development in later chapters.

Thanks. I had this in a notebook so I just copied it onto my computer from there and forgot to put in paragraph breaks.