SeraphTree

:) The ally ways became enshrouded in shadows, as the sun peaked its way over the distant horizon. I jogged to my house, soon ending my early morning run. This ...

XD I like it. There are just a few things that stand out. :) *** Anyway, I went to the front door or should I say gate? There was a ...

Okay... sorry got a little lost about where you were. :D *** King Orlin rode his horse quickly through the Pass of Shades in the Moore Mountains *** This is ...

Well... you are postponing The rescue of Koreth.... from what I gather. Did they just give up hope on him?? Or is he going to magically pop up later and ...

Don't worry Saint. I'm worse than you XDXDXDXD Again, cut to the chase!!!!!!! Her beloved Koreth is dying!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I don't want to hear this constant bickering, because..... KORETH!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

Again, a bit of rambling [Now I'm listening to 'Alone' by Heart XDXDXD]. Couldn't really get into it. I mean, KORETH IS DYING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! So... yes. :D I'm getting kind of ...

Hm. My only dealio was that it rambled a bit. :) I also expect to see more distress from... the MC [I never found out her name] How ironic. I'm ...

:D *** “But I really need the toilet mum!” whinged Kelly, particularly emphasising the word “need”. This didn’t matter to mum, she just let the comment pass her by. *** ...

*** We looked at each other for what felt like hours, all I could do was look deep into his big purple eyes . w e were wolf-demons , so ...

* She awoke to find she was now alone in her bed. Though she dreaded getting up, she knew she had too. * This is too much telling. :) * ...

:D Destruction is bliss Thy destruction is greater than thy hate Spite thee and thou shall depart from life A few mistakes. :) Upon the city of Naethr, a chill ...

:D The boy had a perplexed look upon his face at seeing the soldiers fall to the ground lifelessly, “Big brothers, why do you play dead? I want to play ...

Whoa!!!!!!!!! Please look at your spacing. :) Also... because it's so long, I suggest you break it into two parts. :)

I also sent you a PM about spaces. It's so your work is easier to read. Otherwise it looks like one solid chunk. Pippo, we are trying to help you. ...

MONKI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D We shared snacks and naps and secrets and our first kiss. We lived, laughed, and loved together. ?? If he's gay, why did he kiss h