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SeleneForeverDream

  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Can't Tell Daddy

    Hiya Silver! I'm here to review, like I said I would. ^_^ Oh and welcome to YWS! :D Nit-Picks: I trust only him – I always had. I'm a tad ...

    Jul 12, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The World is a Circus

    Hiya Medrol and welcome to the wonderful world of YWS! :D I'm Selene *shakes hand* and it's wonderful to meet you. ^^ Here on YWS we have a few rules: ...

    Jul 12, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Olivers Inspiration ch. 2

    Hiya romantic! I'm back for more. ^^ Nit-Picks: He had the worst luck when it came to getting and finding any decent girlfriends. They all were always the worse ones ...

    Jul 12, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Blind - Chapter 23 part 2

    Hiya Meep! I should have reviewed this sooner... but I'm here now! :D With his face glowing, Nathan put his arm around Melody’s slender waist, like a victor with his ...

    Jul 12, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Olivers Inspiration ch. 1

    Hey romantic! Wow, I just love that you're posting in the romance section! We really don't see the male sex anywhere near here most of the time... but anyway, good ...

    Jul 10, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Chapter 3. still untitled rock star's unlikely love

    Hey! I haven't talked to you in forever! Well, I'm here now to review your story, so I hope that helps. ^_^ Nit-Picks: What is with that guy? He thought ...

    Jul 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Sisters

    Hiya KayC and welcome to the fabulously wonderful world of YWS! I'm Selene and it's nice to meet you. :D Here are some nit-picks: Sisters screech and bicker and scream, ...

    Jul 9, 2009
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Hapily ever after

    Hey TeenQueen! I shall be your reviewer for today. ^^ So here I go! But everything has to end. Love, family or friend. Everything’s a disaster. There’s no happily ever ...

    Jun 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Can I brake?

    Hi Kat! Once again, I see you've been writing some lovely poetry. :D Nit-Picks: Somethings getting in the way. "Somethings" should be something's. This goes for the same line in ...

    Apr 25, 2009
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: Books please (again)

    The Sword of Truth series by Terry Goodkind is excellent for fantasy lovers and people who like Eragon. My avvie is represents the Sword of Truth series, because they're some ...

    Apr 17, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: A Love Circle

    Hey Ruby! I am here, as requested. :D Aw, I feel so bad for him. I hope he finds some sort of way to be with Rosie, or maybe a ...

    Apr 16, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Bully Blues

    Heya Mona! This poem looked like it was a personal experience, but also sort of seemed violent. That's just my opinion, but I think there could have been other ways ...

    Apr 16, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Back To Our Roots

    Hey Zorah! You have an excellent piece here that really has me pumped to go help the world and change the future. You have some very idealistic views here, but ...

    Apr 4, 2009
  • Article / Essay » General, General Re: Stream of Airport

    Via, you had my full, undivided attention the second you said you were in the Newark Airport. I cannot tell you how many times I've been there. I know where ...

    Apr 4, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: First Chapter of My Romantic Comedy

    Heya Maestro, welcome to YWS! My name is Selene and I shall be your reviewer today. :D So since you're new here, I'll give you a quick run-down of the ...

    Apr 3, 2009


This is the way the world ends, not with a bang but a whimper.
— T.S. Eliot