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Re: Can't Tell Daddy
Hiya Silver! I'm here to review, like I said I would. ^_^ Oh and welcome to YWS! :D Nit-Picks: I trust only him – I always had. I'm a tad ...
Jul 12, 2009 -
Re: The World is a Circus
Hiya Medrol and welcome to the wonderful world of YWS! :D I'm Selene *shakes hand* and it's wonderful to meet you. ^^ Here on YWS we have a few rules: ...
Jul 12, 2009 -
Re: Olivers Inspiration ch. 2
Hiya romantic! I'm back for more. ^^ Nit-Picks: He had the worst luck when it came to getting and finding any decent girlfriends. They all were always the worse ones ...
Jul 12, 2009 -
Re: Blind - Chapter 23 part 2
Hiya Meep! I should have reviewed this sooner... but I'm here now! :D With his face glowing, Nathan put his arm around Melody’s slender waist, like a victor with his ...
Jul 12, 2009 -
Re: Olivers Inspiration ch. 1
Hey romantic! Wow, I just love that you're posting in the romance section! We really don't see the male sex anywhere near here most of the time... but anyway, good ...
Jul 10, 2009 -
Re: Chapter 3. still untitled rock star's unlikely love
Hey! I haven't talked to you in forever! Well, I'm here now to review your story, so I hope that helps. ^_^ Nit-Picks: What is with that guy? He thought ...
Jul 10, 2009 -
Re: Sisters
Hiya KayC and welcome to the fabulously wonderful world of YWS! I'm Selene and it's nice to meet you. :D Here are some nit-picks: Sisters screech and bicker and scream, ...
Jul 9, 2009 -
Re: Hapily ever after
Hey TeenQueen! I shall be your reviewer for today. ^^ So here I go! But everything has to end. Love, family or friend. Everything’s a disaster. There’s no happily ever ...
Jun 10, 2009 -
Re: Can I brake?
Hi Kat! Once again, I see you've been writing some lovely poetry. :D Nit-Picks: Somethings getting in the way. "Somethings" should be something's. This goes for the same line in ...
Apr 25, 2009 -
Re: Books please (again)
The Sword of Truth series by Terry Goodkind is excellent for fantasy lovers and people who like Eragon. My avvie is represents the Sword of Truth series, because they're some ...
Apr 17, 2009 -
Re: A Love Circle
Hey Ruby! I am here, as requested. :D Aw, I feel so bad for him. I hope he finds some sort of way to be with Rosie, or maybe a ...
Apr 16, 2009 -
Re: Bully Blues
Heya Mona! This poem looked like it was a personal experience, but also sort of seemed violent. That's just my opinion, but I think there could have been other ways ...
Apr 16, 2009 -
Re: Back To Our Roots
Hey Zorah! You have an excellent piece here that really has me pumped to go help the world and change the future. You have some very idealistic views here, but ...
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: Stream of Airport
Via, you had my full, undivided attention the second you said you were in the Newark Airport. I cannot tell you how many times I've been there. I know where ...
Apr 4, 2009 -
Re: First Chapter of My Romantic Comedy
Heya Maestro, welcome to YWS! My name is Selene and I shall be your reviewer today. :D So since you're new here, I'll give you a quick run-down of the ...
Apr 3, 2009
