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You're welcome! :D

Thanks! Yeah, I see what you mean. Evelyn is a harder character, so I'm having trouble drawing the line between making her seemed closed off and just plain not giving ...

Hi! These are really good chapters, very well written, but I still have no idea whats going on. I'm hooked, but I'm still very much confused. I'm not sure if ...

Wow. I'm sure you're tired of hearing this, but I want to say that I'm very sorry for your loss. This story was so incredible, I am now sitting here ...

Thank you so much! :D Glad you liked it!

Really? Whoops! My apologies!

Wow! This is an amazing piece!! So emotional powerful! Really good job, it tugged at my heart!

Why thank you! If you would like to read more on this topic, I'm writing another short story along the same the same lines as this one but with the ...

Thank you! Yeah, I just realized how messed up my first sentience was! Thank you for pointing that out to me! It should had said The dark rolling waves thumped ...

Oh my gosh! Thank you so much!

Hey there! I wanted to start off by saying what a great job you did on this piece! It flows really well! I personally wish you had added more detail ...

Why thank you! And, due to a change in my head and having no computer until now to update this prologue on, read the 21 part at 20 please! Hope ...

Ooh, I'm so sorry! Might be my computer, or just my horrible spelling skills. Either way, I hope the misspellings get better in the future. Thanks for reading!

Okay, thanks! I'll work on that. Yeah, you really needed to read the first chapter, because this is kind of a complex storyline, and you will need to read the ...

Thanks for your review! Well, Bree isn't working for the government, she will be working for New York Life insurance, an insurance company. And she isn't taking information, shes taking ...