ScarletMonkey

This was a good poem, really great imagery, reminds me of a beautiful painting i once saw in an art gallery.. It was fantastic up to: I could see straight ...

This seriously needs some punctuation, I found it slightly hard to read, I agree with the above, clarity was quite an issue in this piece. And hear a knock on ...

Great stuff here, your use of coffee as descriptions of you and your ex lover was just amazing and very original This is your best work I'd say One small ...

My friends and I have to live with this names everyday because we're what people would call "emo". we have no one to rely upon or talk to about our ...

This is, to be honest, A really dull poem. I remember my priorities, I sit down and try to write, This was the part where I thought "Oh good it's ...

To be honest, I thought this was one cliche after another, being a bit emo, please don't take offense at what I say, or what I just said. I think ...

I'd like to say that I understood this piece but I honestly don't. If it's based on a personal event then that's great but I honestly couldn't find the 'message' ...

I really like how you started with 'I am broken' And ended with: 'I am human' on that last line, it means the poem has gone in a circle, and ...

To be fair this isn't really an accurate representation of the effect of drugs on someone However It is an excellent example of how psychological illnesses such as schizophrenia and ...

This was cool, it's a different idea to write about parents and I think it's a topic that you wrote about extremely well. I'll let off all the fireworks I ...

I feel that I should congratulate you You've written one of the best poems I have read so far on this site Congratulations My favourite bit is definitely the contrast ...

I'm going to be honest, I don't get it... I really don't understand the concept of the 'Red Star', I'm thinking it could be God, a guardian angel, a seperate ...

I really hope you finish this because so far this sounds pretty amazing Right now I really want you to explain this part: I always knew I was different. Unique ...

Hair that sweeps ever so gently across my neck, sweetest ecstasy… I absolutely adore this line simple because of the great imagery that I got from this Overall I liked ...